A Sunday Drive :: FFR Batch Submission
EppuJoloZ - A Sunday Drive - EppuJoloZ [6 / 10]
Aug/Sept 2022
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https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4771953&postcount=329
Found this chart lying on my songs folder, so heck! Why not just upload it here.

Also, I guess I could clarify the perm info a bit: I give perms to all the songs that are made by me as EppuJoloZ. This includes all my Newgrounds/Soundcloud releases that don't feature the name JLZ/JLZilla.

Simfile Folder Name

A Sunday Drive (EppuJoloZ)

Note Count

457

Chart Length

2:01

Average NPS

3.9239

Estimated Difficulty

29.09

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:06

Hand Bias

x 9

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 5

Jumps

x 63

Hands

x 1

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
5 - 15.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
6 - 12.00 nps 1 Second
11 - 11.00 nps 2 Seconds
22 - 11.00 nps 5 Seconds
40 - 8.00 nps 10 Seconds
62 - 6.20 nps 30 Seconds
157 - 5.23 nps 1 Minute
282 - 4.70 nps

Color Count

x 188 (41.14%)
x 122 (26.7%)
x 8 (1.75%)
x 122 (26.7%)
x 13 (2.84%)
x 3 (0.66%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.22%)

Largest Note Gaps

5.4s4.4s1.37s1.23s1.1s0.97s0.83s0.83s
35
28
21
14
7

A Sunday Drive (EppuJoloZ) [6/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

13.241-14.066: Bit weird PR given 11.864 & 12.690.

15.167: Missing note on 1.

17.919 & 18.332: Missing notes.

19.158: Missing Note.

26.314 & 34.020 & 35.121 & 52.736: This motif doesn't work, it's far too subtle of a sound and it's not really consistent with anything. Would suggest simply putting the intuitive 26.176 instead.

45.718: Missing note, there's piano here too.

55.075-1:30.305: This entire section has a significant increase in drums frequency and intensity, yet it is not reflected much or at all in the chart. It does include the guitar solo stuff which helps, but aside from those it is a bit underwhelming.

1:17.094-1:19.296: This is wayyy too spiky for how the chart is layered.

1:20.672: This is really confusing layering now.

1:41.176: ?

1:50.030-1:52.323: Those are all 16ths, no 24ths in here.

This is a lovely song, and the ideas are nice but unfortunately there is a lack of consistency and accuracy that cannot be quickly fixed. This definitely could make for a cool low-diff chart with the necessary work though.

A Sunday Drive (EppuJoloZ) [6/10]
>Permission good (Within limited)
>Folder contents, metadata good. .sm expects a background file, oh well
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - hmmm… Will need to look closer

Layering after 19.846 seems pretty random. The chart should definitely get a solid touch up to address this. Some kick notes are jumps, some snare hits are jumps, but there doesn’t seem to be any consistency that I can notice.

26.314, 34.020, 35.121, 1:45.580, (many more such spots) - ?? ghost?
1:18.745 - (subjective, can ignore) would probably opt for something other than a trill or staircase here. Trill doesn’t capture the chord change very well imo
1:23.699 - (subjective-ish) This being a trill is probably a bit too fast for the intended difficulty level. I’d opt for a roll or roll-like pattern
1:26.727 - similar to previous note
Very much recommend removing the last note here, it detracts a lot from the chart.

I can see this getting in with some refinements. The layering is definitely my biggest issue with this one, and affects nearly the entire chart. If that were tightened up along with some other polish this could be a fun little addition to the game, just not quite there yet. Pretty solid for what looks like one of your first files!