Flyer :: FFR Batch Submission
jacobvl39 - Flyer - MOSAIC.WAV [6.75 / 10]
Aug/Sept 2022
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blanket perms (https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821)
A fairly mellow song from Mosaic.wav that ended up as an easier chart

Simfile Folder Name

Flyer (jacobvl39)

Note Count

985

Chart Length

2:20

Average NPS

7.1741

Estimated Difficulty

46.67

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 23

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 1 4 - 0

Jumps

x 240

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
5 - 15.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
13 - 13.00 nps 2 Seconds
24 - 12.00 nps 5 Seconds
59 - 11.80 nps 10 Seconds
103 - 10.30 nps 30 Seconds
262 - 8.73 nps 1 Minute
466 - 7.77 nps

Color Count

x 550 (55.84%)
x 331 (33.6%)
x 5 (0.51%)
x 94 (9.54%)
x 2 (0.2%)
x 3 (0.3%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.37s1.1s0.7s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.5s0.5s
35
28
21
14
7

Some PR improvements and nerfed the ending streams a bit

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Artist changed: Mosaic.wav => MOSAIC.WAV
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Note Count changed: 973 => 985
AVG NPS changed: 7.11431 => 7.17407
Last Delay changed: 0:02 => 0:01
Hand Bias changed: 33 => 23

Flyer (jacobvl39) [6.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

0.560: Incorrect quantization on these intro vocals. Should be 0.503, 0.674, 0.874 & 1.246.

2.332: Also too late. Closer to 2.246.

6.503: This second roll feels much less relevant than the first one now that it's buried by the clear drums. Consider only keeping the first roll and layering drums here.

10.446: Note here, even if subtle sound, for consistency with 7.703's rhythm. Same at 13.189.

17.646: Understandable omission if purposeful, but the lyrics do start here in case you missed it.

19.617: Missing note? Probably fine but when following japanese vocals like this, skipping a "syllable" feels slightly odd during gameplay. Here it's "ku", and at 22.360 it's "shi" from "sagashite".

21.417: Can remove this for the held consonant. Fine if it stays though.

25.532: Missing jump.

27.417: Consider doing 3232 or something else here. The long 14 trill isn't the most representative as both the guitar and bass change PR here.

33.417 & 36.160: Why no jump here? See 30.674.

47.303: Jump?

56.732: Missing note. See 59.474.

1:00.160: Missing note, drum.

1:05.817: Arguably better to not include this in the jack, as it's quite different in tone.

1:06.931: Ghost note, this goes at 1:07.103.

1:14.817: Missing note.

1:17.474: Ghost note, or at least doesn't seem consistent with the layering.

1:31.017: Bit odd here to repeat 234, PR wise (with 1.30.332).

1:41.431: Very sudden given that 1:30.332 doesn't have such a 32nd.

1:51.074: Nothing really seems to justify the long series of (13) here; there are 7 such jumps in a row. If anything these 5 starting from here are ok as a motif, considering 1:54.160, but the ones before this probably need to change.

1:59.646: Jump.

1:59.817: Missing note.

Overall this chart is cute and has fun ideas, but the execution is lacking a bit too much unfortunately. The layering is a fair bit inconsistent throughout and not always intuitive as to what drums are to be played or not.

Flyer (jacobvl39) [7/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Seems pretty good, might be a few nitpicks

6.589 - Probably want to remove this note given how you’ve followed drum fills in the rest of the chart
34.189 - might want a note here
56.732 - vocal missing?
1:06.931 - wrong 16th for drum (put at 1:07.103)
1:09.332 - ?
1:12.589 - similar to 34.189, might want a note here
1:15.931 - (super subjective, can ignore) - not entirely convinced this syllable actually hits, but it’s not a big deal either way. Probably works better as is for flow
1:23.046 - similar to 34.189, might want a note here
1:31.231 - lands fine on the 4th imo
2:07.446 - may as well have a note here

Broadly, I think this chart is decent. It could do with some touch-ups but this is a fairly effective chart for the song. CR-level rating.