Camille, the Steel Shadow (rushyrulz) [7/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

43.274: Missing note.

46.201: Missing note. While this looks intentional, it just doesn't work because the instrument is layered in this section and is clearly audible here.

47.989-48.965: Could improve PR here; no need to sacrifice it so much to have identical jumps on percussions.

49.128: This is a good example of a note that could be omitted because it follows a loud climax and isnt super audible.

51.404: Could be on 1 to be consistent with the minijack before it and to match 59.209.

55.388: Missing note.

1:02.136-1:03.599: This isn't a single longjack. The melody goes 333222111, not 333333333.

1:08.152: Jump. See 1:15.957.

1:27.502 & 1:27.583 & 1:30.428 & 1:30.510 etc: Would suggest layering these since 1:26.607 is layered, even though it's not the exact same instrument. Otherwise this section is pretty long and a bit boring given how easy it is. Then the real break starts at 1:39.697.

2:26.445: Missing note.

2:28.477: The longjack should stop here, the melody returns with clear PR. 2-notes minijacks could be fine maybe.

2:47.989: Can be a hand for the crash.

2:57.745-end: This section is a bit confusing. The song's intensity is very average, yet the charting fluctuates between the most dense jump usage in the file and easy stuff. Would suggest reviewing the layering a bit here.

Overall this chart is pretty fun to play and while it has some consistency issues, the approach is generally fine. The midsection break is slightly dragging as is and could benefit from a slight bump up in difficulty and the ending could be toned down a bit, but they're also not egregiously wrong either. Jack usage was fun.

Camille, the Steel Shadow (rushyrulz) [7**FR/10]
>Permission good (Riot Games)
>Folder contents good.
>**Song artist not set in .sm, and appears incorrect on submission page. Change both to “League of Legends” (is attributed this way on multiple sources)
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Seems broadly okay, but too lengthy

16.770 - (subjective, can ignore) Would argue for [23] for PR
46.201 - no note?
47.502 - jump?
1:00.266 - (subjective, can ignore) - no note? Understandable as-is or add for consistency
1:02.136 - 1:03.437 - pitch keeps changing on each 4th here, suggest following it instead of longjack
**1:04.087 - .575 - don’t know what’s going on here, only hear 12ths
1:04.575 - 1:20.185 - check over this section for 24th consistency
1:21.160 - .811 - (subjective, can ignore) these hands are all different pitch and violin descends, might like to remove the jack
1:21.973 - pitch changes on 4th after, move back to 3
**2:22.136 - same thing as 1:04.087 note
2:47.989 - (subjective, can ignore) would personally prefer if the chart ended here as I think the current ending detracts a fair bit imo, but not necessary
2:57.745 - end - Recommend giving this section (if you don’t remove it entirely) a brush over to ensure both that you’re happy with the layering here and your use of 24ths is consistent - there are some missing 24ths here depending on what you want to do here

The chart is difficult to evaluate as a judge. I think it really needs some general cleanup - that’s your FR condition. It’s in a kind of weird state where the song doesn’t do you a whole lot of favours in offering something interesting to follow, but you do seem to have reflected the song as well as could be expected here.

It’s not for me, but the LoL appeal might help this out and it’ll work a fair bit better with some more polish.

Checking on the status of this file, as it has been over 1 month in-batch with Fixes Required without any fixes submitted or acknowledgment of notes.

Please submit fixes or respond to notes soon, otherwise it could risk rejection. I can extend the time of the file in-batch if-needed but requires communication with the Stepauthor.

The file has some improvements. I think it still needs some more cleanup so I've written more/new notes based on the new version. Keeping it in FR status for now.
It's close and most of these are just consistency checks more than outright errors.

13.843 - jack on 4 instead of 3 here is a bit jarring
16.770 - suggest [23]
40.672 - probably want the jack to start here and end at .998 if following bass. If following the drum, then change 44.575 to be consistent with what you have here
1:00.437 - I think you can still get by with adding this as a jump to keep up with layering the drum here - A eg. [14]1 would work well as a transition to this next section (You do something similar-ish at 1:08.152)
1:00.754 - missing, compare 1:02.217
1:04.087 - straight 12ths from here to the quad
1:27.827 - debatable ghost
1:41.648 - missing ..guitar? ..mandolin? strum burst, compare 1:43.599 etc
2:22.136, 2:29.941 - same as 1:04.087 - straight 12ths
2:57.827 - feels missing. Can debate on whether .908 should be a jump, fine either way

2:29.941 still should get fixed
3:04.656 missing

Otherwise good stuff, thank you for fixing this up!
Moved to accept.

Crediting to Riot Games is fine.

https://ffr.fandom.com/wiki/Riot_Games