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Between The Buried And Me [6.25 / 10]
June/July 2022
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
The rolls are 32nds. Non-recolourized version available if needed.
Pretty tournament viable aside from length imo
Pretty tournament viable aside from length imo
Simfile Folder Name
Fix The Error (Tru)Note Count
3451Chart Length
4:59Average NPS
11.6575Estimated Difficulty
88.72
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 47
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 28 3 - 118 4 - 110Jumps
x 589
Hands
x 269
Quads
x 18
Color Jumps
x 101
Color Hands
x 19
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
93 - 18.60 nps 10 Seconds
182 - 18.20 nps 30 Seconds
487 - 16.23 nps 1 Minute
839 - 13.98 nps
Color Count
x 1203 (34.86%)
x 1074 (31.12%)
x 260 (7.53%)
x 695 (20.14%)
x 46 (1.33%)
x 21 (0.61%)
x 10 (0.29%)
x 10 (0.29%)
x 132 (3.82%)
Posted at 9:49pm on April 6th, 2023
Fix The Error (Tru) [5.5/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
17.554-38.281: The layering here is so confusing. First you have the jumps on the piano at 18.553 & 20.008, then it seems to be on the bass guitar at 21.008 & 21.735, then there's just no more jumps at all until 29.190 and the singles stop following the bass entirely. Then there's more of roughly the same confusing layering until 38.281.
35.190-37.917: None of the bass guitar here (which I'm assuming is what's layered with that stream since it's by far the most prominent instrument) is 16ths.
23.372: Missing jump? Kick seems to be layered on 20.463.
28.644: From 26.826 to here the synth melody is followed along with the drums, so omitting this feels odd.
1:17.644: Missing note. Happens at 1:19.099 and all the following iterations so maybe a charting decision, but these 16ths are clear drums.
1:44.156: Could warrant a (12) jump to differ from the 3 following minijacks on col 1 which are different drum sounnds
1:47:438: Bass kick layered there but not at 1:47.156 for example?
1:47.906: Bass kick again?
1:54.000: These should be 32nds since you do use 32nds in this section for the drums. Luckily you can simply do (23)1432 and it plays just as well.
1:57.563: Clear missing note. I get some of the omitted notes, but the clear drums probably should be there at the very least.
2:00.001-2:03.376: Wrong quantization entirely. Should be 20ths, not 24ths.
2:07.591: Missing note. Actually, from here to 2:09.466 the kicks aren't layered at all so I kinda get the decision, but subjectively it played weirdly.
2:11.310: Missing note.
2:11.751: Missing note.
2:11.876: Missing note.
2:12.499: Arguably missing note.
2:14.158: Ok now I'm getting pretty confused with this drums layering.
3:15.283: Missing jumpjack.
3:23.252-2:23.627: There are no 12ths here and it's pretty audible since the melody only slows down on 2:23.627.
3:24.470: Ghost note. This is actually still 12ths on 3:24.502 and 3:24.627.
3:24.945: Why is this a hand but 3:25.719 is a jump?
3:50.493: Not a fan of this. It's extremely forced abstract charting with no basis other than the lyrics having "rainbow" in them. The "tomorrow" at 3:57.268 then just feels super bland.
This chart is bold and tries some fun ideas such as the long consistent white colored anchors for example, but lacks execution in too many places to go ingame for now. A thorough cleanup should be done with particular attention to the layering. What I have listed is only what I could spot relatively quickly; there is most likely more than these elements.
Posted at 9:58pm on April 6th, 2023
Fix The Error
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- 22.008: Missing percussion note?
- 35.553: This slows down a bit here, should be 2/24ths (i.e. offset 12ths) until 35.917.
- 36.917: Interesting pitch bend could be cool to follow here.
- 104.342: Same sound as 104.061, could move to column 1 and move the minijack just after to column 2 for an interesting effect.
- 112.028: Missing note.
- 126.936: Minijack?
- 131.307, 131.749, 131.874, 132.463: These are pretty prominent to omit.
- 175.498: One too many notes in this burst.
* 179.248-203.248: This feels like a bit of a spike in chart intensity to a rather relaxed part of the song. The continuous guitar in the background is very soft and so it feels almost dumpy. I think a lighter approach here would do the chart a lot of good.
- 204.373: These are still 12ths, no 16ths here.
- 218.684: I really like the vocal minijacks here
** 230.490, 245.974: Really don't like these rainbow sections. Not to be a fun-hating curmudgeon, but intensity-wise it doesn't work--the rest of the vocals here are not acknowledged at all (no other dumping or even added layering, despite this being a small part of a larger phrase sung at consistent intensity) and not too much else is going on, so this is an enormous jump in what the chart is doing for next to no change in the song.
- 272.103, 278.426, etc.: These gluts are pretty right-hand biased, in contrast to the first ones.
- I really, really like this chart up until 179.248, but feel it loses its purpose a bit beyond that--it's still Fine afterwards, but it doesn't match the intensity or the flow of the song nearly as well as it does before. It's hard to give concrete suggestions there that don't involve recharting entire sections unfortunately. The one thing that I think *needs* to be changed are the rainbow rolls, for reasons mentioned above--they just don't fit. Other than that, ok. [7/10 FR]
Posted at 1:26am on April 7th, 2023
Thanks for notes!
Looks like a lot of ..errors to fix.
ehhhhehe
Will resub this at some point.