conflict (Velocity) [7.5**FR/10]
>Permission good (2011 BOF)
>Folder contents, metadata good
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(Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate) Anticipated song, pretty strong file overall.

12.431, 13.181 - (subjective, can ignore) Make hands for bonus interest?
16.556-17.681 - pls shuffle this 2 anchor around - suggest changing it at 17.306 with the chord change

39.056-1:03.056 - Going to assume you want to follow the melodic synth here and list out some stuff
-39.618 - suggest reduce from jump, let transition parts like 41.306 have the increased layering
-43.087, 46.087, 46.837, 47.212 are ghosts, and I think removing them will increase the tension of the next half of this section.
-1:01.556 - hand here but not 51.056? Or the very end? Suggest removing this one or adding the other two, or just the end one.

1:12.618 - jump?
1:26.868 - jump?
1:27.899 - recommend 12 for consistency
1:37.837-1:47.306 - (subjective, can ignore) Honestly I’d just reduce everything here to stream at most (except appropriate minijacks, see other section of notes) to really build tension for what will be the high point of the whole file
1:37.837-1:47.306 - (not as subjective) Decide whether you’re following that background hi-hat and add/remove notes as necessary. If you combine this with the last note, you might think about not following it.

1:45.056-1:48.056 - Assuming following the percussion/bass here instead of melody
–1:45.899 - ghost
–1:46.649 - missing
–1:47.212 - debatable missing
–1:46.931 - 1:47.868 - that 2 anchor again, probably best to just change 1:47.493/1:47.868 to 1

**1:48.243 - ~1:52.556 - having a hard time hearing what is actually included in this build up. Going to guess you want the melody that’s been playing the whole time because what’s here seems very random. I’m not sure of the intent here and it’s in too important a section to not require a fix/explanation. Layering is fine – what is the rest of it to?

1:58.556/1:58.743 - recommend swapping these jumps for PR (or at least perception of it before the js starts)

2:00.431 - probably copy/pasted, same 2 anchor note as 16.556
2:12.993-2:13.931 - (subjective, can ignore - as is can be fine if it’s what you want) Think layering the piano more strictly would be a better option here, if slightly inconsistent

**2:25.181-end - Again not certain what is actually intended to be represented in this build up, kick drum and piano?? There are either ghosts or missing notes depending on what you wanted to follow here. When fixing this see if you can avoid the 16th 2 anchor that exists here too (currently 2:25.087-2:26.024).

**Another big part of my suggestions for this chart will be ensuring minijack consistency primarily in the jumpstream. My assumption is that you want them for the piano, so I’ll list out the missing ones where the pitch doesn’t actually change. I may have missed some, so go through very carefully on this, perhaps as your last fixing step.
19.462 - not minijack
20.587
31.462
32.587
1:32.681?
1:34.743 - start here, not 1:34.837
1:38.306 - why minijack?
1:40.462
1:43.087
2:12.993 - not minijack, at least not 16th
2:15.337
2:15.712

I went ham on this judgment mostly because this is such an anticipated song for FFR to finally get a file for. I wanted to help make sure it’s as polished as it can be. That is to say I’m nitpicking a lot here, but in a broad sense the file is pretty darn good. Really need to address the 1:48.243 and 2:25.181 notes, highly recommend addressing minijack consistency notes. Other notes are comparatively minor.

Good stuff, moved to accept