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** The chart generally makes sense structurally, but I feel like it needs to regulate its difficulty much better. The bursts can be extremely dense while going to very soft sounds, particularly in the back half. I somewhat feel the same about the longer jack patterns; they're mostly fine I think, though some of them transition really tightly into bursts which is no good, and one at the very end is completely unacceptable. The jumpstream is also a bit spiky as it is typically rolly and light, but occasionally becomes very dense and OHT-based. These difficulty issues drive my reject, so I'll go through them first.

- 77.273: This is fine in the difficulty curve of the file, but I really question whether this sound warrants a 4-note OHT at 399bpm with other stuff going on simultaneously.
- 83.814: This one is more reasonable given the sound but I'm still not sure about forcing a 266bpm equivalent minijack in it.
- 130.619: With the jumptrill this forces a bit of a long jack. Would probably be acceptable if it were more warranted, but it's not strictly a repeated sound. 130.732 and 131.183 are different, and so it'd more accurately look like this: https://i.imgur.com/Dk5Pe1J.png
- 164.454: Feels a touch overdone to me. I think it's because I can't tell why 164.566, 164.792 are jumps, and having them as jumps causes a bit more anchoring than necessary. I'd go for something like this personally: https://i.imgur.com/AQEGx1j.png
- 178.157-178.947: This is really hard on the right hand.
- 222.875-223.890: This is both tremendously dense and tremendously OHTy and really needs a nerf. Please keep a look out for other patterns like this. This is by far the worst instance, but there are other similar, shorter bits which are still spiky, like 221.521 and 225.243-226.145 (on the right hand).
- 230.995-231.446 is a bit overdone. Cutting 231.108 down to a [12] jump and rearranging the stuff after would make it more reasonable, and I'd probably cut one note off the 231.333 burst as well.
- 237.875: Way too heavily layered, this is a pretty absurd pattern.
- 253.439: These two bursts feel excessive, particularly because they're connected by a column 1 anchor.
- 259.867, 268.439: This is basically a 48th burst at 266bpm, which is frickin' fast and feels a bit excessive.
- 267.875: This is a 4-note right hand 24th trill into a 5-note 16th left hand trill anchored into a burst which is the equivalent speed of 48ths, all at 266bpm. Frickin' ouch.
** 276.672: This right hand jack is truly ridiculous, *especially* because it ends in a burst which forces a 12th minijack on the same column. Needs serious nerfs.

My issues with the bursts are particularly relevant because there are times like 276.108 where seemingly louder sounds are charted with comparatively much weaker patterns. They could sometimes be made harder, but I feel it's more of a priority to bring the crazy ones down a notch.

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- Given the relatively long intro before the first note (and the fact that the first bit of it is basically just silence), I think you could pretty safely cut it up to around 2.291 to make it easier on players that restart.

- 24.234, 24.359 are pretty noticeably early. More accurately moved to 24.257, 24.404 respectively. (I do like your colour scheme a lot though.)
- 30.320: These two notes go to a different instrument than those after, but just form one big 23 trill. Please rearrange. 31.360, 32.257 similarly have repetition where it shouldn't be.
- 42.198: Given the next two hands go to the crash, this hand should be at 41.971 instead.
- 48.063: Instrumentation completely different from previous gallop, yet the gallop is the same. Similarly 49.529 could be a 32334 pattern to distinguish from 49.303. Check you're separating sounds well enough in this section as a whole.
- 51.897: 24ths, not 32nds.
- 64.247: Remove this or add note at 64.585.
- 99.829: No vocals here, don't understand the jack.
- 100.845: Why not just normal 16ths?
- 120.694: Fine, but I'd personally prefer this were only a jump so you could move the next two notes--I like the trill before this but feel emphasis is taken away by having it continue two notes too long.
- 189.266: Feels significantly more anchory than the previous instances of this and I can't really see why that should be--see 190.732-191.860 on the right hand for a striking example.
- 233.138: Not a minijack. OHT would be fine.
- 265.957: I actually think you could afford to make this a bit harder to emphasize the 3/16th rhythm here.

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The difficulty smoothing is really the main thing this file needs for acceptance. The things mentioned afterwards I did find pretty noticeable even at full speed, but they are generally more nitpicky. Unfortunately though I have quite a bit of issues with the difficulty curve and it's too much for an FR to cover. [5.5/10]