Najimi Breakers :: FFR Batch Submission
Shadow_God_10 - Najimi Breakers - Goreshit [5 / 10]
15th Official Tournament (More Than 70 Difficulty)
PublicEvents
Rejected
goreshit has quite a few songs in game, and has one in game as of a week ago.
Do you like gallops, minijacks and jumptrills? All of that is included in this near 1900 note monstrosity.

I tried to balance the anchors on the left/right hand as respectfully as possible, but still should be a good challenge for any player looking for that sweet AAA

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Najimi Breakers (ShadowGod)" vs "Najimi Breakers (Shadow_God_10)"

Simfile Folder Name

Najimi Breakers (ShadowGod)

Note Count

1883

Chart Length

1:38

Average NPS

19.8002

Estimated Difficulty

99.84

First Note

0:02

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -15

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 45 3 - 27 4 - 769

Jumps

x 431

Hands

x 144

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
17 - 34.00 nps 1 Second
29 - 29.00 nps 2 Seconds
50 - 25.00 nps 5 Seconds
115 - 23.00 nps 10 Seconds
217 - 21.70 nps 30 Seconds
607 - 20.23 nps 1 Minute
1206 - 20.10 nps

Color Count

x 794 (42.17%)
x 530 (28.15%)
x 0 (0%)
x 509 (27.03%)
x 0 (0%)
x 44 (2.34%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.05%)
x 5 (0.27%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.27s0.27s0.27s0.17s0.17s0.17s0.17s0.17s
35
28
21
14
7

Sync was off by 0.01, and other small corrections made.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1874 => 1883
AVG NPS changed: 19.70557 => 19.80021
Hand Bias changed: -16 => -15

najimi breakers
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- Sync, metadata, permission good.
* NOTE: An author having multiple songs in-game does not necessarily imply we have permission for every song of theirs. It happens that we do have blanket permissions from goreshit so there is no issue here, but please make sure to link the appropriate post in the permissions thread or some other source justifying this in future submissions.

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I have a few pretty prevalent grievances with this file's approach, which are all pretty widespread throughout the chart. I don't think it would be very useful to give the chart a full review since most of my complaints are of this form, so I'll go through the categories and give some early examples of each, with the understanding that the concepts apply throughout.

* 32nd OHTs: These are very spiky and not very fun, and I recommend removing them entirely. See 0.907 / 38.880 / etc. (Two-handed trills like 7.394 are fine.)

* Minijack use: Some minijacks go to perfectly explicit repeated sounds (percussion usually) and these are fine, but others are much less clear and feel pretty arbitrary. The three at 10.299 are much less audible than the others to that point, and ones like 13.813 / 15.434 / 15.840 neither go to a repeated sound nor make much sense for emphasis imo.

* Column bias: This ties into the next note, but make sure you're not accidentally stacking a whole bunch of stuff on one column or one hand. 11.380 is a pretty spicy left-handed pattern; 12.326 is rough on column 2; there are some anchors throughout that don't seem to follow any repeated sound; etc. Given the file is pretty heavy on split trills (which is fine) there are times you may not be able to avoid it completely, but you should be able to cut it down a fair bit.

* Jumpstream patterning could often be more attentive to the song. For instance:
--> I like the OHT at 1.380, but that percussion ends at 1.651, and 1.651 also the same sound as 1.786. Hence 1.651 should be moved to a different jump (separating it from the OHT) and should match 1.786. Changing these and mitigating anchors might look something like this: https://i.imgur.com/KtFZ6Ac.png
--> 4.218 is the same sound as the previous 3 jumps and different from 4.353, so should be a [34].
--> 5.299 is quite distinct from the next hand but you use the same chord.

* Layering (particularly what warrants a hand over a jump) also has some inconsistencies but I feel the playability and streamlining concerns are more pressing here.

- This file can definitely be salvaged (the minijack-and-split-trill approach is fitting), but it does feel sloppy and needs substantial cleanup before acceptance into FFR. [5/10]