Najimi Breakers :: FFR Batch Submission
15th Official Tournament (More Than 70 Difficulty)
PublicEvents
Rejected
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Najimi Breakers (ShadowGod)" vs "Najimi Breakers (Shadow_God_10)"
Simfile Folder Name
Najimi Breakers (ShadowGod)
Note Count
1883
Chart Length
1:38
Average NPS
19.8002
Estimated Difficulty
99.84
First Note
0:02
Ending Note Delay
0:01
Hand Bias
Framers
0 - 0
1 - 0
2 - 45
3 - 27
4 - 769
Jumps
Hands
Quads
Color Jumps
Color Hands
Color Quads
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps
0.5 Seconds
17 - 34.00 nps
1 Second
29 - 29.00 nps
2 Seconds
50 - 25.00 nps
5 Seconds
115 - 23.00 nps
10 Seconds
217 - 21.70 nps
30 Seconds
607 - 20.23 nps
1 Minute
1206 - 20.10 nps
Color Count
Largest Note Gaps
0.27s0.27s0.27s0.17s0.17s0.17s0.17s0.17s
Posted at 10:57pm on May 31st, 2022
Sync was off by 0.01, and other small corrections made.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1874 => 1883
AVG NPS changed: 19.70557 => 19.80021
Hand Bias changed: -16 => -15
Posted at 8:01pm on July 31st, 2022
najimi breakers
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- Sync, metadata, permission good.
* NOTE: An author having multiple songs in-game does not necessarily imply we have permission for every song of theirs. It happens that we do have blanket permissions from goreshit so there is no issue here, but please make sure to link the appropriate post in the permissions thread or some other source justifying this in future submissions.
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I have a few pretty prevalent grievances with this file's approach, which are all pretty widespread throughout the chart. I don't think it would be very useful to give the chart a full review since most of my complaints are of this form, so I'll go through the categories and give some early examples of each, with the understanding that the concepts apply throughout.
* 32nd OHTs: These are very spiky and not very fun, and I recommend removing them entirely. See 0.907 / 38.880 / etc. (Two-handed trills like 7.394 are fine.)
* Minijack use: Some minijacks go to perfectly explicit repeated sounds (percussion usually) and these are fine, but others are much less clear and feel pretty arbitrary. The three at 10.299 are much less audible than the others to that point, and ones like 13.813 / 15.434 / 15.840 neither go to a repeated sound nor make much sense for emphasis imo.
* Column bias: This ties into the next note, but make sure you're not accidentally stacking a whole bunch of stuff on one column or one hand. 11.380 is a pretty spicy left-handed pattern; 12.326 is rough on column 2; there are some anchors throughout that don't seem to follow any repeated sound; etc. Given the file is pretty heavy on split trills (which is fine) there are times you may not be able to avoid it completely, but you should be able to cut it down a fair bit.
* Jumpstream patterning could often be more attentive to the song. For instance:
--> I like the OHT at 1.380, but that percussion ends at 1.651, and 1.651 also the same sound as 1.786. Hence 1.651 should be moved to a different jump (separating it from the OHT) and should match 1.786. Changing these and mitigating anchors might look something like this: https://i.imgur.com/KtFZ6Ac.png
--> 4.218 is the same sound as the previous 3 jumps and different from 4.353, so should be a [34].
--> 5.299 is quite distinct from the next hand but you use the same chord.
* Layering (particularly what warrants a hand over a jump) also has some inconsistencies but I feel the playability and streamlining concerns are more pressing here.
- This file can definitely be salvaged (the minijack-and-split-trill approach is fitting), but it does feel sloppy and needs substantial cleanup before acceptance into FFR. [5/10]