Indestructible :: FFR Batch Submission
Rapta - Indestructible - Disturbed [6.25 / 10]
March/April 2022
PublicEvents
Rejected
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An easy Disturbed file.

Simfile Folder Name

Indestructible (Rapta)

Note Count

224

Chart Length

2:09

Average NPS

1.7773

Estimated Difficulty

7.4

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 22

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 8

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
2 - 6.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
3 - 6.00 nps 1 Second
4 - 4.00 nps 2 Seconds
6 - 3.00 nps 5 Seconds
12 - 2.40 nps 10 Seconds
21 - 2.10 nps 30 Seconds
55 - 1.83 nps 1 Minute
108 - 1.80 nps

Color Count

x 205 (91.52%)
x 19 (8.48%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.33s1.17s0.67s0.67s0.67s0.67s0.67s0.67s
35
28
21
14
7

Indestructible (Rapta) [6.5/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good. Maybe tack on a difficulty tag like [Easy] or [Beginner]
>Sync off. Adjust offset to -0.067. Notes in this review will use this offset.

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - Doesn’t feel quite right. Will investigate more closely.

Start-18.733 - Really not sure what your goal was here, the representation just seems random. If the guitar were more closely followed I think this would be a pretty reasonable approach.
23.733 - missing, based on the structure for the rest of this section
45.400, (debatably) 1:01.400 - jump, based on the structure of the rest of this section
1:06.733 - 1:16.067 - same issue as the intro
1:21.067 - missing
1:36.067 - (very subjective, can ignore) jack might be a bit too much for this difficulty level

Frankly I think this is actually pretty close. The intro and 1:06.733 sections definitely need to be reworked to better follow the guitar that I think (..?) it’s trying to follow.

(somewhat subjective) I’d also love to see a slightly more aggressive treatment of the chorus (45.400 - 1:06.733 and 1:42.733 - end[with this cut]) , maybe a bit more layering would do the trick there. As is it just feels a bit lacking and too similar to the rest of the chart.

Indestructible (Rapta) [6/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC NOT OK (offset should be -0.067, currently is -0.095)

18.095: Would be more consistent on 18.261 instead to match 8.928.

22.761: Here there is a 414 just like at 19.428, but they don't follow any identical sequence of either the lyrics, the guitar or the drums.

34.428: This is layered but 23.761 isn't, yet they're essentially the same sections musically.

33.428: Long unjustified anchor on column 4, 5 notes.

1:49.428: Very long anchor on column 4 again, 7 notes.

1:58.761: Layered as a jump but 1:01.428 isn't.

This chart is lacking structure in the slower 4ths sections and especially in the intro, and as a result is a bit too underwhelming. Adding on that the sync issue, this has to go back for now.