Dream Continuation (Velocity) [7.5/10]
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- 0:17.317 There is some quite heavy [12] usage in the beginning of this chart. Here we have 3 back to back [12]s despite them all having different chords. PR wise i really think you should mix it up to try and avoid using the same chord so much.

- 0:54.401 this section really feels quite empty compared to the rest of the chart. There are a lot of sounds here but few notes. What i think is missing is some more generalized charting. Placing notes in a way to generalize the sounds instead of ignoring the sounds that are too fast. something like https://i.imgur.com/Iyw8y7u.png

- 1:12.402 This note isn't charted despite 1:11.374 being charted. both have accented piano notes so they should both have notes.

- 1:20.117 The chart here and the chart at 1:53.032 are basically identical. and yet the song at both locations having completely opposite intensities. While the charting is accurate to the music it doesn't match the vibe of the music. Ideally the chart should build with the music. Imagine we start where the song is quiet, just single note streams with no jumps, then the song builds up so we start adding in the jumps, now we hit the peak and its a full on stream as a flurry of notes play in the song. or charting sounds that dont have nps that match the difficulty you want and generalizing them.

fun fact i completely forgot to write my final thoughts lol. Anyways the chart is a good foundation a few concepts like following the intensity of the song could really help to make it an even better chart.

Dream Continuation (Velocity) [7/10]

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1.257: Long 6-notes anchor on the 4ths in column 2 from here. PR could be improved in this intro.

17.371 & 19.429 & 21.486: All (12)'s but all different chords.

35.886: This shouldn't be the same jump as 33.829.

52.344: Moving to col 2 would improve PR.

1:07.773: Col 1.

1:20.117-1:35.546: As is, this section really just has no transition into the following section which uses the same layering, AND the section after that (1:53.032) which raises the intensity even more. What I would suggest is charting every 12ths starting from 1:36.575, and then on top of that, layering all 4ths as jumps starting from 1:53.032. Without something to distinguish these three parts, this chart simply becomes too bland.

This chart has good potential, but needs a bit of cleanup on the PR and the buildup layering of the second half. First half is actually quite solid in terms of layering.

acknowledgement/fix where

> Note Count changed: 336 => 516

Ok, will take another look at this today.

Excuse me this is so good? I hope you agree Velo. I'd personally give this new version a solid 9/10.

1:11.716: Missing 24th (probably on col 2)

wow, this chart has received some big changes, and for the better! It might not be as easy, but this does a much better job at following the swings of the music.