[posted for xXOpkillerXx]

SELF-COFFINIZING (gold stinger) [7.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

11.770: Not a hand here. At most a jump, maybe even a single.

12.422: Idk if intentional, but at 17.638 you have proper "PR" for the low bass (three consecutive 8ths on same column). Here you don't seem to have that. Could be worth a check.

16.986: Same as 11.770. The "here" vocals that you seem to follow are on the preceding 8ths in these cases.

17.964: Your layering of the "right" and "here" vocals has been consistently on the same jumps and hands in each iteration (and even later in the song), so this should probably be a (24).

20.572: Having this be just a roll variation is fine, but you could emphasize it more. One suggestion I'd have is to use a more split-rolly placement for the 32nds starting at 20.409, and here transition to actual rolls. You do it well at 1:43.861 actually.

25.787: Not sure I follow the pattern choice here. You could follow the drums more easily by moving this note to 1 with a justifyable minijack from the preceding 16th, and moving the following two notes on 3 and 4 respectively. Would be more consistent with the 8ths anchor at 23.180. Mostly preference though, what you have is fine at it matches 1:49.240.

38.501: Pretty long anchor on 3 there, might wanna break that up somewhere.

40.457: Slightly strange to have (14)(34) and a response-ish (34)(14) on 41.027. Preference though.

51.540: Fine, but really if you un-meme'd the following 32nds you could layer this as a jump.

52.029: Slightly memeing here lmao. No one is hitting that 2121 normally, especially given the left-to-right motions preceding it. You could change the (14) 16th jump to (34), which would keep the intensity but be far less troll. It would also be more aligned with 1:12.892.

1:03.439: Can't hear what this jump goes to.

1:05.069: Minijack would flow better on the right hand given 1:04.824.

1:06.047: 43(34) is a bit intense for what the minijack is going to imo.

1:07.432: This whole section you've been charting the double drum kicks as jumpjacks, but here you have (24)(134), small inconsistency.

1:14.522: Dunno what the intent of that minijack is. It doesn't match 1:15.174. Other occurences like 1:19.738 and 1:24.954.

2:03.339: No need for a jump here.

2:20.696: Missing note.

2:23.142: Should be a minijack.

This is a pretty fun file. The inconsistencies are quite minor in general, and with some ironing out this would be a great high D7 chart to play.

SELF-COFFINIZING (gold stinger) [8/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 0.8x Rate - Seems solid

2.398 - (somewhat subjective) suggest 4 or maaaaaayyyyybe [24] or [34]
18.127 - .290 - oof this right hand
35.730- 36.219 - oof this left hand, especially at 36.056
1:07.432 - .595 - oof this right hand

Pretty well done overall. Recommend smoothing out the patterns noted above. Otherwise good to go.

1:07.432: There's added drum snare layering every 16th for 1:07.432 -> 01:07.677 which is adapted from the intro verse, layered that way to separate minijack intensity between both hands (left & up column).

1:14.522: It was kind of the distinct layering style specific to those 8ths in the chorus throughout the file, but I get that it comes across as confusing to understand that, so I've changed them to normal 8ths.

Thank you again so much for the notes! I think the chart itself flows a lot better now. :)

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2963 => 2962
AVG NPS changed: 16.22673 => 16.22125
Hand Bias changed: 3 => -6