VEC+LEGGENDARIA (gold stinger) [4.5/10]

15.702 - minijack collision into [134] seems a bit odd here, very minor though
18.040 - this is a pretty difficult patch of jumpstream here; the [14][14] is understandable but there's a lot of LH minitrilling and anchors with no reprieve for about 1.3 seconds, so the jumpstream in this feels much harder than most dense jumpstreams at that speed. i don't think the jumps make much sense musically either so the pattern difficulty seems unnecessary
20.268 to 27.172 - layering scheme in this makes sense, but the heavy layering in this along with the pattern difficulty (lots of split jumptrilling and fast OH minitrills) really doesn't fit the rest of the chart musically since this section is two synth melodies, while the rest of the denser sections involve frequent bass kicks
32.963/33.408 - very minor, but the complete lack of minijacks seems a bit strange here given that the claps in this section are quite prominent, arguably more prominent than the bass kicks themselves
44.767-44.878/etc. - feel like you could use a minijack here, the synth here is a bit more pronounced here and i think these two sounds are of the same pitch as well. this goes for every instance of this
1:03.029 to 1:08.375 - the jumpstream here is much easier than the JS at 18.040 because of how explicitly rolly it is, which is pretty jarring because this is the highest energy part of the song alongside the section after
1:10.506 to 1:15.501 - in contrast, this section is much harder than the JS at 1:18.040, this is especially true for sections like 1:11.214 to 1:11.938 (chained 5-note OH trills), but even parts like 1:11.938 to 1:12.262 can be a bit much because of the 16th anchor and frequent OH trilling (even if the trills are shorter). the runningman use makes sense, but in general i think it causes far too much strain even relative to the JS in 18.040.
1:20.847 to 1:34.210 - the missing 8ths in this are particularly jarring because there's no clear cue for why the 8ths are omitted; i can't tell why some 8ths are being omitted though.
1:53.809 to end - ending 24ths clock at 400+ bpm 16th light jumpstream that isn't cheatable; this is definitely way too much even with buffs to multiple jumpstream sections.

The chart is extremely uneven throughout; even if the layering decisions are mostly sound in isolation and there are clear ideas going on, the difficulty curve present in the chart doesn't reflect the song well and is very frustrating to play through in general. The song itself also doesn't lend itself to anything particularly compelling either, so even with really big structural changes (mostly patterning but also layering), I'm not sure if it'd be something that players would enjoy because the chart's difficulty would be so concentrated in a few small areas.