ParaDice (Velocity) [7.0*/10]
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-[00:06.529] I probably wouldn’t share PR in the right column with the jump given that the single and jump have distinctly different PR, but just my opinion.

-[00:21.529] Definitely not how I would’ve stepped the section. There’s a very distinct ‘1-2-3’ triplet pattern via drums that gives strength to particular notes and thus the ‘upbeat’ outside of the triplet feels comparatively weak for the structure. Especially notable at 00:36.845 where the 16ths were dropped intentionally.

-[00:44.661] If you’re doing some level of Vantablack sweeping here, the duration of this one should subtly fill around this 16th imo until it cuts quickly like what you’ve done with the 32nds here.

-[00:45.371 / 00:56.108 / 00:57.687 etc.] Not a drummed jump? Maybe gloss over sections on what drum layering is happening in syncopation with jumps, feels like some of them were accidentally left out either because they were quieter or intervened with a particular pattern. Check out later sections as well for this particular note.

-[01:11.661] Commit to the 16th trill. Fill it out.

-[01:52.713] Missing 16th?

-[01:56.582] Pretty big missing 4th

-[02:19.003] PR.

-Needs some small fixes across the board, recommend taking a big looksie regarding timestamp 00:45.371. FR for the smaller final 4 timestamps, and a response on timestamp 45s. You're also gonna need to give an English transliteration of that music author name.