Redemption (Storn42) [7.0/10]
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-[00:01.634] Shared PR here with the down column but in right column instead?

-Get the sorta gimmick that’s happening here, could play out a lot better PR-wise imo to use all 4 columns. E.g. 00:03.159 is descending. While the 16ths are paired, the 8th after both 16ths should be lower than them.

-[00:24.854 -> 00:35.363] A lot of bass usage in this section that I kind of wish was filled in.

-[00:46.380] Plays quite empty compared to the rest of the song, especially given solo sections being as bulky as they are later within this chart. There’s guitar & hi-hats unlayered here.

-[01:53.753] Missing 16th here from pitch-bent guitar.

-[02:05.109] Guitar actually stops here on the 16th, and then picks up on a missing 8th note at 02:05.363. The 4th in-between is not there for the guitar, only the drum (kinda breaks structure for the ‘guitar solo’ section as a response).

-[02:14.120] This is such a pain to hit, and could’ve been layered much more comfortably without causing two-hand stress like this. (like a single anchor, 24232423 etc., or 42314231 etc.)

-[02:16.549 -> 02:17.058] Really wish you took advantage of the guitar whammy here along with the downstrum that is not stepped on 02:17.058.

-[02:49.007] What happened to earlier established PR at 00:03.159?

-Plays alright I guess, could use some fix-up. I could see this being in-game, but feel like it’s going to come across as particularly sloppy without some TLC, so Change Recommended here.

Redemption (Storn42) [9**FR/10]
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Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - It was good. Really good. Until…

Kind of kept waiting for this song to be all “woah, yeah, kickstart my heart alkdkfo asdf9oaa aslkdfj” or similar Mötley Crüe / other Dad(Grandpa?) Rock trope. Excellent song choice for event token imo.

24.515 - ~34.346 - including the vocal notes would help this section feel less empty and more consistent with next section
**2:14.120 - 2:15.363 - yeah, no.. Change to a 3 note pattern or any other nerf.
2:18.244 - missing guitar?

This is a downright fantastic file, but the trill completely ruins it. Virtually any other guitar representation would work better here. There’s no need for this spike even if it’s in a more meme-y batch.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1555 => 1584
AVG NPS changed: 8.54865 => 8.70808
Hand Bias changed: 15 => 30

@gold stinger
-[00:01.634] Shared PR here with the down column but in right column instead?

[00:24.854 -> 00:35.363] A lot of bass usage in this section that I kind of wish was filled in.
- I honestly agree but I haven't found a way to incorporate it that felt right. I've tried something, cus yea it feels empty, but idk if its the best choice.

[00:46.380] Plays quite empty compared to the rest of the song, especially given solo sections being as bulky as they are later within this chart. There’s guitar & hi-hats unlayered here.
- I'll add in some guitar notes.

[01:53.753] Missing 16th here from pitch-bent guitar.
- its not exactly a bend. Its a technique called vibrato in which the string its bent back and forth causing a vibration in the pitch. It happens on almost every held note in the section (1:57.566 is a great example) Its not a bend in the traditional sense, and It doesn't sounds like a separate note to me at full speed.

[02:05.109] Guitar actually stops here on the 16th, and then picks up on a missing 8th note at 02:05.363. The 4th in-between is not there for the guitar, only the drum (kinda breaks structure for the ‘guitar solo’ section as a response).
- The pitch between the 16th and 4th is the same, but i'm pretty sure its still a new note. it doesn't have much of an attack but its hypnotically louder, and bends afterwards (also is it sounds more like a synth than a guitar to me but whatever)

-[02:14.120] This is such a pain to hit, and could’ve been layered much more comfortably without causing two-hand stress like this. (like a single anchor, 24232423 etc., or 42314231 etc.)
- yea yea, its nerfed.

[02:16.549 -> 02:17.058] Really wish you took advantage of the guitar whammy here along with the downstrum that is not stepped on 02:17.058.
- sure, lets throw some more color into the chart :)

[02:49.007] What happened to earlier established PR at 00:03.159?
- whoops, jacks are back.

@Tru
24.515 - ~34.346 - including the vocal notes would help this section feel less empty and more consistent with next section
- i'll give you something better than vocals. have some bass.

**2:14.120 - 2:15.363 - yeah, no.. Change to a 3 note pattern or any other nerf.
- yea, i knew this was coming. I couldn't think of a good pattern and a 3 note roll didn't really represent the sound right to me. So instead i've come up with another stupid pattern (its basically a 3 note roll) that should be easier.

2:18.244 - missing guitar?
- It wasn't missing, it was intentionally not charted, but now its there!

A new chart file was uploaded.

Good stuff

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1584 => 1585
AVG NPS changed: 8.70808 => 8.71358
Hand Bias changed: 30 => 29

found a missing jump at 0:26.548