Tanaka
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- 23.465-24.916: I don't personally mind this, but note that it is very column 2 biased. Also 54.594/etc.
- 40.077-41.045: Was initially confused by this and the next 16th anchor being longer than usual, but I think that's because the vocal phrase is slightly longer? This does feel a little out of place on the left hand though given how intentionally you kept everything else right-handed.
- 51.771, 112.094: Arguable missing note.
- 62.282: A jumptrill here feels a bit overdone.
* 67.013: This is pretty memey. It's... fine, but the contrast between the trill and the roll is really really big, and it's a touch spiky, so I'd recommend nerfing the trill (e.g. 23231414 type stuff) and buffing the roll to be a more complicated but generally ascending pattern.
- 118.303-124.755: Okay so this is really fun, but it is also pretty spiky. I would recommend breaking up longer anchors a bit, since certain columns tend to get a lot of focus at times, particularly the inner columns. I really like the concept and trilly nature of this patterning though.
- 125.723-126.368: I think standardizing this would work well, i.e. only 3-note 48th flams as opposed to alternating 3- and 4-note ones.

- I really like this. It is definitely a little spiky and has some parts that could afford slight nerfs, but it's conceptually very strong and technically sound. Good stuff. [8.5/10]