Dawn (7.0/10)
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-[00:51.348] 4th not included?

-[01:07.394] Personally, would've preferred jumps to drums here that are notably outlined at 03:32.510 without the 20ths.

-[01:16.289] 8th here should be a hand.

-[01:38.615] Hand here on this 8th, following 8th probably not hand-worthy. (See: 02:01.289) Double-check this transitional to see if hands/jumps need swapping around here.

-[02:00.941] Probably an 8th hand here, given what instruments & drum hits are being paired with hands vs. jumps.

-[02:55.882 -> 02:57.627] Missing a ton of filler here. Even if watered down for an easier section, 02:57.103 and 02:57.452 should definitely be filled in here.
around here. The rest of the song doesn't utilize the same dump-structure layering and jumps difficulties of some sections (compare 03:31.115 to 00:43.673) and underlayers the difficulty of other sections (compare 03:21.347 to 01:52.045). The overall result, is a particularly spiky chart in nature.

-[03:52.220] I've already laid out my case for stuff beyond 02:58, but further near the end of the song, watch that you're not dropping 6-note long One-hand jacks like this one near the ending of a 4 minute file. Done a fairly good job at avoiding this before this point.

-[04:03.382] 5-note 172bpm jack on left hand into 6-note 172bpm jack on right hand to close out the song.

-It's a CR from me unfortunately. Would've accepted w/ a cut at the mentioned note, but file balance & difficulty spiking/structure is lost in the last minute of the file as-is for me.
I personally feel like everything past 2:59.022 on Dawn plays as a completely separate file of that before the timestamp. In difficulty, layering, and patterning so it was pretty negatively received on my end. Almost as-if the file was initially stopped for a bit at that point, and then picked back up after a couple weeks with a different mindset for the song.

Dawn (Pizza69) [9/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good. (.old file exists oh well)
>Sync good

Playtest Impression, 1.0x Rate - I will never be able to read 20ths but this seems real solid.

1:49.516 - (subjective, can ignore) - Might like a note here
3:52.045, 4:03.731 - (subjective, can ignore) - Just making sure you want these minijacks all on the same hand like this. It’s fine, just …checking…

This is one heck of a file. I’m a pretty big fan of this approach, it’s a really interesting take on a song that would probably make a pretty boring file without more novel structure ideas. Nicely done!