(posting for Pizza69)

Alchemist
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- Permissions, metadata good.
- Sync weird. See **'d note at 115.584.

- 8.988: I feel like this stream could be a bit more consistently trilly, it feels slightly odd how it starts with an OHT and is then just rolls.
- 15.690: Why is this not on column 4 like at 13.137?
- 21.275: Conspicuous missing note.
- 21.914: Bassier than previous kick, in the past you distinguished this by using a different jump. I suggest doing the same here because as is you have three [12] jumps in a row, each to different sounds.
- 41.222: Given how you follow these in the second iteration near the end of the file, I think you could afford to use slightly more interesting patterns on these 24th bursts in this section.
- 54.307: I do wish this were distinguished from the next [14] jump, perhaps by making this a hand. Up to personal preference, though.
- 60.690: Would emphasize the repeated sounds in the percussion a bit more here, perhaps something along these lines: https://i.imgur.com/c8ltXXk.png
- 62.605: I don't think a pattern this aggressive really fits PR or the vibe of the song here. Would use something like 1 232 1 myself.
- 65.158: Suggest [234] to break up the repeated [23] patterning going on to different sounds here.
- 79.680: Feel like these 24ths could be a bit more expressive--there's a big kick at 79.999 which is not acknowledged, 80.158-80.371 are actually the same sound, so you could use a trill or the like. This is also different from how you do it later at 100.584, where you end on a minijack.
** 115.584, 120.677: These should be set to 94 bpm, not 96. These both mess up the sync of the chart so that afterwards it is almost 30ms off.
- 122.472: I feel like this minijack takes emphasis away from the 3-note jack following, on top of being slightly less comfortable. Recommend removing.
- 126.275: This is on the 12th at 126.222. Similarly 127.552/131.382/etc.
- 129.626: oof owie my right hand
- 132.818: Recommend distinguishing these three [14] jumps.

- Cool file, definitely uses some nice accenting with jacks and such, although I do think it's slightly overzealous with the climax theory--the ending stream bursts are so much more aggressive than the ones earlier in the song, and 129.626 is a good bit spicier than the other gluts. There were a couple parts earlier in the song that could fairly easily be buffed up to be a bit more expressive and also even the difficulty curve slightly. The sync in the ending needs to be fixed before this goes in, but otherwise I'd say you're good to go. [7.5/10 - Fixes Required]

(gold stinger notes)

Alchemist (Psychotik) [9.0*/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

-[00:21.275] Missing 8th (from main melody)

-[01:02.126] Check PR between these two down column singles, they are of different pitch.

-[01:44.014] Swap down/up order for PR (Ascending rather than Descending).

-[01:55.583] You break sync here with this BPM change, as the following 4th that swaps back at 188BPM, should be at roughly 01:56.226, but is instead at 01:56.208.

-[02:00.676] Same sync problem as the last note magnifies the issue here. Check your Waveforms.

-I don’t perceive any issues in note placement that was created by the last 2 notes, but double-check regardless since a common issue with sync errors is misplacement of notes afterwards since they were placed with an incorrect sync. Otherwise, perfectly fine file. Generally just needs a sync fix for the BPM changes in the file.

Sync is looking a lot better. Could be a little more precise but negligible.