Mice On Venus :: FFR Batch Submission
Matthia - Mice On Venus - C418 [7 / 10]
May/June 2021
PublicEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4748777&postcount=260
Easy file

Simfile Folder Name

Mice On Venus (Matthia)

Note Count

205

Chart Length

1:51

Average NPS

1.9267

Estimated Difficulty

13.53

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -5

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 1

Jumps

x 31

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
5 - 15.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
5 - 10.00 nps 1 Second
7 - 7.00 nps 2 Seconds
12 - 6.00 nps 5 Seconds
28 - 5.60 nps 10 Seconds
51 - 5.10 nps 30 Seconds
129 - 4.30 nps 1 Minute
164 - 2.73 nps

Color Count

x 118 (57.56%)
x 45 (21.95%)
x 0 (0%)
x 23 (11.22%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.49%)
x 1 (0.49%)
x 17 (8.29%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.77s2.4s2.37s2.37s2.3s2.3s2.27s2.23s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -1 => -3

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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AVG NPS changed: 1.92609 => 1.92669
Hand Bias changed: -3 => -5

Mice On Venus (Matthia) [7**CQ/10]
>Permission good (Minecraft)
>Sync good
>Metadata, Folder contents good

33.487,35.684 - probably keep [13] for PR but fine as is
66.194 - no jump?
83.371 - jack is a little iffy, I'd lean toward not having it in such an overall easy file but probably fine as is
85.398 - not sure what this 48th grace is to. As the only one like it, it seems inconsistent

I'm really conflicted on this one. It takes over a minute at an average of 1 nps to get anywhere. Frankly the lead up is just too long and uneventful. It needs a cut. My suggestion is for cutting out the beginning to 46.609, and use the rest. This would keep the more interesting of the beginning's motifs and solve this file's most glaring issue.

The file is otherwise reasonably well made and would be neat to see in FFR. Minor tweaks are highly advised.

**CQ on a cut, either as described above or similar (CQ if average of both judge's notes reaches acceptance)

*Ratings are not final until both judges have posted their notes and the file status is updated.*

Mice on Venus 7
22.533 this chord is notably higher than the one you have as [14] before it
42.245 this should probably have a grace too, and optionally even some way of setting up a motif with the following split chord at 44.427, which is the same chord, but more muted. I'd consider something like this: https://i.imgur.com/pG9a3Ki.png --- or anything else you like, of course - just a small suggestion to draw the player's attention to interesting tidbits like this.
52.073 best as col2 probably for pr
1.04.024 this chord is very significantly lower than the previous one (you have that as [23])
1.23.506 please move this off the jack; it's the only 16th jack in the file and it's not actually PRed correctly anyways

I'll be honest and say that while I don't think this file necessarily adds much to the FFR context these days (as we have plenty of low difficulty files going to very slow piano songs as it is), the song itself is very pretty, the chart is reasonable, and a combination of the two is worth enjoying in and of itself.

[After looking at trumaestro's review] will let the CQ stand. I don't know if you have to cut all the way to 46s as suggested, but some cut is definitely going to make this file more replayable. At minimum you can start at something like 18.119, but really try for the latest possible start you can while still keeping enough of the song in so that you're happy - the really good part is a lil too deep in at the moment.

No response back on CQ status after some time, so moving this to Rejected so it doesn't get stuck in the batch system. Re-submit with fixes to one of the open batches, and we'll work from there.