wholeheartedly :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo - wholeheartedly - siqlo [7.75 / 10]
May/June 2021
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Simfile Folder Name

wholeheartedly (WirryWoo)

Note Count

1269

Chart Length

5:13

Average NPS

9.3561

Estimated Difficulty

69.02

First Note

2:58

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -41

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 3 3 - 3 4 - 1

Jumps

x 259

Hands

x 90

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
35 - 17.50 nps 5 Seconds
78 - 15.60 nps 10 Seconds
135 - 13.50 nps 30 Seconds
364 - 12.13 nps 1 Minute
614 - 10.23 nps

Color Count

x 576 (45.39%)
x 354 (27.9%)
x 7 (0.55%)
x 300 (23.64%)
x 7 (0.55%)
x 15 (1.18%)
x 6 (0.47%)
x 0 (0%)
x 4 (0.32%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.37s0.7s0.7s0.7s0.7s0.7s0.67s0.53s
35
28
21
14
7

wholeheartedly (WirryWoo) [7.5/10]
>Permission good (2020 BOF event)
>Sync good
>Metadata, Folder contents good

4.941 - debatable missing drum note, it's fairly prominent here though
36.912 - missing note? (subjective af, can leave as is)
37.855 - missing note? I think this is slightly more prominent than the 8th right after but you can have both or one (subjective af, can leave as is)
*54.912-71.369 - Double check your jump/hand use in this section. It feels overall rather inconsistent, especially the hands.
57.998 - note feels missing
102.398 - kind of feel this note needs a Grace, Too (subjective af, can leave as is)
106.512 - most subjective missing note I've ever seen (can leave as is)
119.969 - missing note

This one needs a few tweaks but it's definitely a solid file. Biggest concern is the 54.912 note so definitely focus on that. Nice work!

*Ratings are not final until both judges have posted their notes and the file status is updated.*

wholeheartedly 8
8.112 there is one missing note for the vocals in between this 8th and the next, a little vague where exactly but definitely missing
Section starting 16.512 up to 27.140: glorious patterning. Don't think it's really possible to do any better
30.826 possible ghost, depending on if you were trying to catch the little buzz here or not (would recommend moving it out of the 2 column in any case so it doesn't look like it's part of the same pattern as the 2 16ths on col2 going to the synth right after)
44.283, 44.969, etc. given your handjacks coming up right afterwards, a single to these notes feels quite underwhelming imo
1.07.254=1.08.112 & 1.10.512 this section is generally really well done too, but these series of jacks here going to I assume the electric guitar don't quite fit with the flow of the rest of this file, nor do you do it in between the two timestamps above when the electric guitar is doing the same thing too. These should likely be removed. The jacks starting 1.11.712 are fine as a buildup utilizing the rising melody
1.38.540 jump (it's fine to drop the jump on the following 16th to accommodate the 4th hand)
1.54.912 the connecting notes on col4 here all the way up to 1.55.597 feel a tad odd, given that this is a break and this sort of patterning makes it feel like the music is still pumping hard. It's not, and the chart should visually and tactilely reflect that by not having an anchor imo
2.03.483-2.06.226 another example of very strong patterning

I think patterning is one your best strengths as a charter and this chart shows it off really well, great job. Good file with just minor suggestions and cleanups to do here and there. This will be quite enjoyed on release I think.