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NightTheater :: FFR Batch Submission
WirryWoo -
NightTheater -
*wakadori [6 / 10]
May/June 2021
PublicEvents
Rejected
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=18&event=133
BMS Open Source Perms.
Simfile Folder Name
NightTheater (WirryWoo)Note Count
1337Chart Length
4:41Average NPS
10.5775Estimated Difficulty
71.49
First Note
2:35Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 11
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 2 3 - 46 4 - 11Jumps
x 325
Hands
x 62
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
18 - 18.00 nps 2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps 5 Seconds
71 - 14.20 nps 10 Seconds
123 - 12.30 nps 30 Seconds
347 - 11.57 nps 1 Minute
668 - 11.13 nps
Color Count
x 445 (33.28%)
x 296 (22.14%)
x 10 (0.75%)
x 549 (41.06%)
x 9 (0.67%)
x 28 (2.09%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 8:07pm on November 24th, 2021
NightTheater (WirryWoo) [6/10]
>Permission good (2020 BOF event)
>Sync good
>Metadata, Folder contents good
4.593/10.951/17.308 - missing note, despite the structure here I think this is pretty dang prominent
30.421/33.600 - think a grace should go on this note
30.719 - missing piano
32.110/32.308 - ghost
32.706 - arguably missing/continue from the grace
36.679 - missing piano
46.613/47.507 - missing note
54.262/54.560 - if you're including the 32nd sweep thing at 53.964, you should probably include notes here too (subjective af, can leave as is)
59.427/61.017 - jump is a 16th late
62.805 - not hand? Understandable tho
65.189 - not hand? Slightly less understandable
69.957 - grace?
93.004/94.593 - debatable ghost, can probably leave it
99.858 - missing piano
103.633 - missing note
104.328 - arguable missing note
105.619, 107.408, - missing note
114.013 - I'd argue to include a note here
122.308/(arguably)123.103 - missing note
This one has tons of tricky rhythms that really need to be nailed, but the file doesn't deliver very well. The file as is looks and plays noticeably sloppy/lazy/rushed whereas the song demands close attention be paid to it. Most of it should be easy enough to parse out between lower rates, the waveform and (now) judge notes. When you go to fix this, also pay attention to the graces throughout the file to make sure you're using them consistently.
It's a no from me, at least in it's current state. This song has incredible potential though so I'm really looking forward to you fixing/resubmitting this file!
*Ratings are not final until both judges have posted their notes and the file status is updated.*
Posted at 11:12pm on December 23rd, 2021
Nighttheater 6
4.592 missing
10.950 missing
13.235 missing
13.334 not a jack at all - it's not the stutter you've been having these jacks to
14.129 right hand in this area is going through some pretty awkward patterning for a quiet intro section
17.308 missing, and I'll stop listing these. You're definitely consistently leaving these out so it seems intentional, I think to capture the syncopated rhythm more cleanly, but it has the negative effect of feeling like you're inconsistently stepping the lead instrument playing.
14.824-14.924, 16.414-16.513, etc. - you stepped these in the intro section too where they went to the very low bass guitar, but in this section that guitar is almost entirely drowned out by all the other instruments which are more prominent than it, including the new synth in this area. as a result it feels like these notes are incompletely capturing that synth
25.553 this triple jumpjack is quite abrupt and doesn't capture the descending melody well imo
30.222 missing for piano
32.655 this is a 16th
32.804 missing for piano?
33.599 missing a grace note after this, since you've shown intent in wanting to do them
46.612 missing
In this new section (ending at 52.473), the jumps are very inconsistently found; there's no predictability to when they'll show up. Many places I thought would have jumps (e.g. 41.248, 42.639-42.838) don't seem to have any. I've tried a number of times and still don't get what the jumps are going to, so if I've missed something, lmk, but as it is it feels very inconsistent
1.05.983 the density of hands in this section (by far the most hands in any section in this file) is at odds with how chill the song is at this point
Rest of the file is more or less structured the same, so won't go into detail. Sorry Wirry :( Not a fan of this one, think it has potential with the cool syncopation going on but needs some polish to get there.