Hello Japan!!
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- Sync, perms, metadata good.

- 61.603: The left hand's taking the brunt of both these bursts & they're held together by an anchor. Suggest evening hand bias a little.
- 65.723: This section through the first half of the 24th stream is pretty right-hand biased.
- 77.111: Pretty faint for a jump imo.
- 77.785: Missing note
- 78.534, 80.931, etc.: Follow 24ths here or omit at 61.753.
** 79.882: Please move this to column 3. This right hand pattern is extremely stressful, particularly because the column 4 anchor continues before and after the 32nd pattern.
- 84.227: Repeating pattern, but non-repeating sound / instrumentation.
- 84.902: Why jump here instead of on the beat?
- 88.629: This 64th is a bit much for the sound, suggest removing. Also causes repeated patterns without repeated sounds / instrumentation.
- 94.865-95.165: Strikes me as a bit much for the sound.
- 99.660: If 99.885 is a jump, this should be too. Suggest removing the jump at 99.585 and adding it here.
- 101.083: Jump should be on 8th.
- 104.885, 105.204: Personally not a fan of flams here--they're not very audible, and they take attention away from the (good) colour usage at 105.353.
- 128.577: Not sure what this 32nd is for.
- 130.974: Not sure what this jump is for. There is missing percussion on the next 16th (131.049), so perhaps a single here and a single there?
- 134.645: Why a jump?
- 136.181: Ghost note
- 145.058: Jump seems excessive with no percussion here.
- 148.230: Still think this burst is a bit fast for the sound.
* 149.703: I still think this OHT is too aggressive--it's less isolated than the others in the chart, and it's very fast.
- 151.894: Noticeably weird spacing in these three green notes, please move this to the 16th before (151.876).

- The chart is definitely looking cleaner than last submission, and the 32nds and colour bursts are looking more reasonable for sure. I still feel like the chart is prone to overaccenting things, though it doesn't usually hinder playability. The jump usage also felt unfocused at times. That said, the only point that is required for CQ is 79.882. [7/10]