MOONEARTH :: FFR Batch Submission
Wiosna - MOONEARTH - DJ SHARPNEL [8.5 / 10]
Feb/March 2021
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- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Moonearth (Wiosna) - Copy" vs "MOONEARTH (Wiosna)"

Simfile Folder Name

Moonearth (Wiosna) - Copy

Note Count

5508

Chart Length

6:09

Average NPS

15.1388

Estimated Difficulty

91.42

First Note

0:06

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 76

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 522

Jumps

x 1330

Hands

x 95

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
21 - 21.00 nps 2 Seconds
39 - 19.50 nps 5 Seconds
94 - 18.80 nps 10 Seconds
184 - 18.40 nps 30 Seconds
540 - 18.00 nps 1 Minute
1069 - 17.82 nps

Color Count

x 1946 (35.33%)
x 1372 (24.91%)
x 24 (0.44%)
x 2013 (36.55%)
x 1 (0.02%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 152 (2.76%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.63s0.63s0.63s0.63s0.63s0.6s0.33s0.33s
35
28
21
14
7

MOONEARTH
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- Perms, sync good.
** Metadata contains background and cdtitle, please remove.

- 126.841, 129.368, etc.: After following them in the previous jumpstream, I am a little disappointed to see these pitch transitions go un-accented.
- 135.210, 135.368, 135.684: Are these for the background piano? If so, they feel arbitrary since you don't follow them at spots like 138.999, which are just as if not more prominent. Similar note at 256.631 (with comparison to 260.420).
- 149.341, 154.394: Percussion here is pretty prominent. Given that you're following the others I think it would be fine to break your jump patterning motif briefly in order to include this here. Similar note at 270.605 etc.
- 160.631, 161.894: Distinct gap in the loud kicks & snares you've been following with jumps, suggest reducing to single. I have similar comments in spots like 183.368, but it's less important there considering how much else is going on. Repeats at 281.894.
- 182.815: You usually omit this jump in favour of jumps to the three kicks, e.g. at 179.657.
- 194.184, 295.236, 305.341, etc.: Shouldn't this just be the usual melody jump sequence?
- 326.578-end: Love this section, perfectly climactic imo.

- This chart is very good kinaesthetically. My one qualm in that regard is that the clipped vocal sections (e.g. 164.894-204.052) feel like the highlights of the song, yet I found them to be some of the easier of the jumpstream sections, so I think you could afford to be a little more aggressive with your minitrill patterning. CQ is only on the metadata, everything else is good to go. [8.5/10 CQ]

Changed BG and cdtitle stuff. Sorry about that!

126.841/129.368 - fixed
135.xxx - I generally find this part of this background piano to be the most prominent, and the others are considerably less audible. Not sure if it's too egregious to keep the notes here though...
149.341 - mhm, fixed.
160.631/161.894 - agreed, fixed
182.xxx - I don't think omitting the jump here would make any sense given that the additional bass kicks only start on the 8th rather than the 4th.
194.184/295.236/305.341 - omg I'm stupid, I think this was just really sloppy copy-paste more than anything

I don't think I can make the minitrilly patterns for the vocal chopped sections any more aggressive without making the patterns super egregious to play unfortunately. Given how repetitive and compact the structure of the chart is, any small change would really add up and make this much harder than it should be. I went for a more prudent approach here.

Applied Pizza's notes.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 5484 => 5508
AVG NPS changed: 15.07284 => 15.1388
Hand Bias changed: 72 => 76