Own Little World :: FFR Batch Submission

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trumaestro - Own Little World - Celldweller [7.5 / 10]

Feb/March 2021

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https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2

Operation: more/easier chordjack files

Blanket - Good L_ck's older slower brother sort of

Simfile Folder Name

Own Little World (trumaestro)

Note Count

2196

Chart Length

3:32

Average NPS

10.4938

Estimated Difficulty

70.94

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -56

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 4 3 - 6 4 - 2

Jumps

								x 507
							

Hands

								x 218
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 1

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
31 - 15.50 nps 5 Seconds
67 - 13.40 nps 10 Seconds
127 - 12.70 nps 30 Seconds
354 - 11.80 nps 1 Minute
665 - 11.08 nps

Color Count

x 1199 (54.6%)

x 803 (36.57%)

x 0 (0%)

x 165 (7.51%)

x 3 (0.14%)

x 8 (0.36%)

x 0 (0%)

x 18 (0.82%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.4s0.4s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s

Needed a couple tweaks, final until judgment!

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Note Count changed: 2162 => 2169
AVG NPS changed: 10.33132 => 10.36477
Hand Bias changed: -58 => -51

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Own Little World [**7.5/10]
I was so scared I was going to have to judge another audio menace like Control v2 when the intro came on, thank goodness
12.126 nothing for the 16th here, remove probably (and connect the 8th after to your 4th for your motif)
13.480 why is this jump
23.227 disconnect this from the preceding anchor on 2 to capture the music shift ideally I think
23.408 I think this transition could be improved somewhat; for one, not stepping every sound as rolly patterns but making a distinguish...ment between the lower percussion like 23.769-23.949 and the higher ones like 23.498-23.588, 24.039-24.130 through patterning would make it play better. Additionally at 24.310 what follows isn't straight 16ths into the next 4th, and at 25.032 what follows doesn't feel best emphasized as 3 offbeat 16ths in the same column
29.635 ghost
40.014 not a big fan of this 32nd roll given the awkward transition you have on the right hand (4 4 43 [34] 3) as a result and the sound that it actually goes to; consider just making this a 24th burst instead
1.00.772 in this section, the patterning shines through, good work! The anchors really make sense, the hands are great, the transition into shorter anchors afterwards when the music breaks down is pretty great.
1.20.988 same concerns on the drum fill section here
1.29.653 you had a 32nd roll earlier (other than the one I pointed out) which seemed vaguely alright even if I wouldn't personally do it, but this one man - I don't hear what's being emphasized here
1.43.552 this 8th anchor feels a bit too long for what's going on - I'm guessing some kind of clzmax theory?
2.04.039 very MIA 16th
2.18.389 missing hand
2.53.420 at least jump pls this is LOUD and SIGNIFICANT
Also this anchor is FUNNY and great
3.09.298 some kind of jump maybe?
3.09.840 disconnect from this anchor I think given that there's nothing significant to have an anchor here to, and then fill the 16th afterwards (missing drum)

Very interesting file - the big, loud main sections are really good and serious 9+/10 level, but then the 'filler' areas where there's not as much going on feel a little more inconsistent and could do with some TLC as well bring them up to the same level. CQ on general polish for those areas.

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Own Little World [**7.5/10]
I was so scared I was going to have to judge another audio menace like Control v2 when the intro came on, thank goodness // Decided to cut this because it's objectively awful, dw. Shifts the timestamps here tho sry
12.126 nothing for the 16th here, remove probably (and connect the 8th after to your 4th for your motif)
13.480 why is this jump // This file actually follows vocals a fair bit, starts here
23.227 disconnect this from the preceding anchor on 2 to capture the music shift ideally I think // sure
23.408 I think this transition could be improved somewhat; for one, not stepping every sound as rolly patterns but making a distinguish...ment between the lower percussion like 23.769-23.949 and the higher ones like 23.498-23.588, 24.039-24.130 through patterning would make it play better. Additionally at 24.310 what follows isn't straight 16ths into the next 4th, and at 25.032 what follows doesn't feel best emphasized as 3 offbeat 16ths in the same column // This section should be improved slightly by borrowing/foreshadowing the anchor idea a bit and adding 25.213. 16ths at 24.310 are definitely there tho.
29.635 ghost // Good catch
40.014 not a big fan of this 32nd roll given the awkward transition you have on the right hand (4 4 43 [34] 3) as a result and the sound that it actually goes to; consider just making this a 24th burst instead // Moved 40.375 to 2 to reduce right hand strain. Right hand would ideally play like 4 4 [34] [34]
1.00.772 in this section, the patterning shines through, good work! The anchors really make sense, the hands are great, the transition into shorter anchors afterwards when the music breaks down is pretty great. // :3
1.20.988 same concerns on the drum fill section here // Similar fix approach used
1.29.653 you had a 32nd roll earlier (other than the one I pointed out) which seemed vaguely alright even if I wouldn't personally do it, but this one man - I don't hear what's being emphasized here // It's the broken/buzzy voice thing. But I did catch the earlier one in this phrase starting a 16th late so thanks
1.43.552 this 8th anchor feels a bit too long for what's going on - I'm guessing some kind of clzmax theory? //Should be improved
2.04.039 very MIA 16th //Just not hearing this
2.18.389 missing hand //Good catch
2.53.420 at least jump pls this is LOUD and SIGNIFICANT //Slightly against the structure I was aiming for here but it can be a [123] I suppose.
Also this anchor is FUNNY and great //shoutout to storn
3.09.298 some kind of jump maybe? //Sure
3.09.840 disconnect from this anchor I think given that there's nothing significant to have an anchor here to, and then fill the 16th afterwards (missing drum) //Sure

//Aside from above notes, there are some more 16ths I put in to help with flow and because I felt they were missing.
//Thanks for notes too! I'm really proud of this one.

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Chart Length changed: 3:35 => 3:32
AVG NPS changed: 10.36477 => 10.43811
First Delay changed: 0:05 => 0:03
Hand Bias changed: -51 => -52

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Final unless more needed from CQ review!

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Fixed the sync, it was all over the place. Removed one jump for consistency. Final for real this time.

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Note Count changed: 2198 => 2196
AVG NPS changed: 10.50502 => 10.49379

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