Righteous Ragemaster Rocketship Rampage
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- Permission, sync good.
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- 14.028, 23.394, etc.: I don't hear cymbal or melody here, this should just be a single.
- 16.809: Suggest [12]--there's no melody here, and you're using [34] jumps for melody here.
- 23.467: Ghost note--this was present at 14.102, but I don't hear anything here.
- 30.711, 34.077: Missing jump to melody.
- 35.687: Should just be single.
- 37.004: Ghost note, no percussion here. This also gives you space to make 37.004 a hand, consistent with 36.711.
- 37.589-45.492: What happened to the jumps to the melody? This seems to have just turned to jumps every beat + cymbals and it's not clear why.
** 45.492-46.955: What is going on in column 4 here?? I'm guessing this anchor is for guitar, which plays straight 8ths, but it seems like it's synced to miscellaneous (and mostly very soft) percussion. Easiest way to take care of this is just to use straight 8ths, and the anchor should also be broken at 46.370 and 46.516 for PR.
** 56.906: These rhythms are significantly off, here are the proper ones: https://i.imgur.com/SZ7hHOK.png
** 66.126: This is easily the fastest pattern so far in the chart, but it's completely inaudible to me what warrants a burst here. Why not just a jump?
- 72.711: Either add a jump here or reduce 68.028 to a single.
- 75.345: There's no 4x repeated sound here, so the 8th minijack and the OHT shouldn't be connected on the same column. Additionally I'd say if any of these 16th trills deserve to be one-handed, it should be the one at 76.224; all four hits on that one are stressed, while in the other trills it's just the first two.
- 81.492: Should be another 16th triplet. Would further suggest using a 234 pattern to distinguish this from the 8th OHT.
- 86.321-86.760: Sync here is a touch off--it's a more even speedup than what you have, going from offset 12ths (i.e. 4/48ths) to 3/48ths to 24ths (i.e. 2/48ths). For clarity, here's a picture: https://i.imgur.com/ROArSML.png
- 88.224: Another place sync can be improved. These rhythms are pretty bizarre, but this seems to be the most accurate: https://i.imgur.com/f0kqvIy.png (the 34 trill is 7/96ths)
- 122.906, 123.199: What are these 8ths for?
- 150.175-151.443: This is really left-hand biased.
** 178.370: This isn't a particularly striking sound, nor is it actually a repeated sound. Please remove this minijack.
- 203.474: Missing clap here. To preserve readability, suggest something along these lines: https://i.imgur.com/ZuHRXmQ.png
- 213.462-222.243: It feels strange to me that this part of the chart is so much less intense than the surrounding stuff, the song is still pretty high-energy. Not much less than 222.243-end, which is charted *far* more aggressively.
- 222.243-end: On that note, I do feel like the layering in this section is a little overdone; pretty much everything gets a jump, which makes the chart feel homogeneous even though the song features very distinct melody & guitar phrases.

* In the 12th stream sections, you frequently have relatively long one-handed trills (usually on the left hand) when there's nothing distinguishing them musically from other parts of the song and plenty of space to avoid them. They aren't spiky per se, but as they are significantly more difficult than the surrounding patterning, it's best to avoid them except where necessary (for accenting or because of density). See 118.516, 128.028, 134.175, etc.

- Definitely on its way to being a pretty neat file, but some odd difficulty spikes and widespread minor errors add up to the point where I don't feel quite comfortable CQing this. [6/10]