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Wartime Stress Disorder :: FFR Batch Submission
ositzxz369 -
Wartime Stress Disorder -
Oliver Hancock [6 / 10]
Feb/March 2021
PublicPurchasedSecretEvents
Rejected
Oliver Hancock - is in the "Permissions List and Information v8" thread. If accepted, I want to have the "Gay" vocal section to be colortheoried into rainbow-colored and the "Blue" vocal section to be colortheoried into blue-colored before the file gets released.
Simfile Folder Name
Wartime Stress Disorder (ositzxz369)Note Count
859Chart Length
1:07Average NPS
13.4219Estimated Difficulty
76.37
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 1
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 28 3 - 37 4 - 11Jumps
x 166
Hands
x 78
Quads
x 17
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
23 - 23.00 nps 2 Seconds
43 - 21.50 nps 5 Seconds
105 - 21.00 nps 10 Seconds
203 - 20.30 nps 30 Seconds
474 - 15.80 nps 1 Minute
818 - 13.63 nps
Color Count
x 251 (29.22%)
x 227 (26.43%)
x 2 (0.23%)
x 97 (11.29%)
x 1 (0.12%)
x 37 (4.31%)
x 0 (0%)
x 1 (0.12%)
x 243 (28.29%)
Posted at 1:59am on August 26th, 2021
Wartime Stress Disorder
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.
- 3.368: Bit of a nitpick, but column 4 would be more accurate PR.
- 8.289: I see what you're going for here, but the latter syllables of "anxiety" are so indistinct that this minijack feels arbitrary.
- 10.531: Also very questionable.
** Honestly, I disagree with the vast majority of these vocal minijacks--2.945 is fine because the syllables are very distinct, 7.341 is similarly alright, 9.496 is fine because the sound is pretty aggressive, but I'm not a fan of any of the others. The first two at 38.807 could stay too.
- 19.238: This vocal seems to fall closer to the 8th than this 16th.
- 20.272: Ghost note?
- 21.220: These 32nds are really nice.
- 26.393: Misrhythm: if you're following melody (which I recommend) these are 12ths, if percussion they're 16ths starting from the 8th, meaning 26.479 is a ghost note.
- 31.522: Missing note.
** 31.824, 33.548, etc.: These minijacks make sense structurally, but make no sense in terms of flow or PR--they exist only since the vocals are offset from percussion, which is nowhere near audible enough for patterning this much harder than the chordjacks surrounding.
- 37.255: Lower than previous note.
- 37.643: More accurate on the following 16th, at 37.686.
- 40.186: Missing jump.
- 50.246: Arguable missing jump.
- The colour theory is... alright, I guess. I do think that in most parts the vocals would be better accented with layering than with white notes. It's not criminally overdone, but I don't agree with it.
- This chart is competently put together for the most part, but most of the minijacks are too aggressive and should be removed. Note that this would reduce the difficulty of the chart significantly, so would likely also require toning down the 16th handjacks in the second half of the chart. Hence, I don't quite feel comfortable with CQing this unfortunately. [6/10]