A Raw Understanding :: FFR Batch Submission
Pizza69 - A Raw Understanding - The Flashbulb [7 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
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Released
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
Blanket permission for all Flashbulb stuff released under Alphabasic, which this was since it's on Arboreal. Collab with M0nkeyz.

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "A Raw Understanding (Pizza69 & M0nkeyz)" vs "A Raw Understanding (Pizza69)"

- This file is a collaboration between multiple authors / stepauthors.

Simfile Folder Name

A Raw Understanding (Pizza69 & M0nkeyz)

Note Count

3683

Chart Length

4:55

Average NPS

12.5857

Estimated Difficulty

97.19

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -33

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 46 3 - 111 4 - 243

Jumps

x 855

Hands

x 51

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 60

Color Hands

x 5

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
23 - 23.00 nps 2 Seconds
41 - 20.50 nps 5 Seconds
94 - 18.80 nps 10 Seconds
182 - 18.20 nps 30 Seconds
529 - 17.63 nps 1 Minute
1024 - 17.07 nps

Color Count

x 1183 (32.12%)
x 841 (22.83%)
x 58 (1.57%)
x 860 (23.35%)
x 49 (1.33%)
x 280 (7.6%)
x 134 (3.64%)
x 100 (2.72%)
x 178 (4.83%)

Largest Note Gaps

3.87s2.9s2.9s1.47s1.43s1.43s1.07s0.73s
35
28
21
14
7

A Raw Understanding (Pizza69 & M0nkeyz) [7.0/10]
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(**)-[00:09.565] singles from 00:02.460 - 00:04.433 missing?

-Not sure if I’m a fan of the cyan colorization in the chart here.

-[01:12.427] Ghost 16th. Remove.

-[01:20.223] Rather like this section.

-[02:00.308] Pizza I told you to stop doing this lmao. 64th in down column into the unnecessarily forced 16th minijack in down column creates an uneven stress in comparison to the rest of the 32nd bursts on left hand, without much going music-wise to warrant it.

-[02:07.672] Personally, would’ve preferred [34][12][134].

-[02:30.853] This not being like 02:07.672 hurts.

(**)-[03:28.308] Missing about half of 16ths happening in this break. For 03:28.490 - 03:29.035, 03:31.399 - 03:31.944, 03:34.308 - 03:34.853, etc.

-[03:44.672] This is pain.

(**)-[03:52.853] There could be a lot of variation used for this section, specifically with this pattern starting consistently on this 8th at every measure. It’s a rather light pattern without much impact in the total melody progression with this section, but its constant repetition throughout makes this section get stale fast considering it’s repeated 14 times (2 times as a 232[14] instead of [24]32[14]).

-[04:20.490] Can we maybe move this minijack to the other hand? Repeat at 04:28.490. Just don’t want to see people get shafted & angry about 4-note long jacks 4 and a half minutes into the file.

-CQ, need notes @ 9 seconds, 3m28s, and 3m52s fixed at a minimum. Also suggest taking a look at other notes for cleanliness/structure.

- Removed cyan colourization in the 50.618-1:19.039 section.
- 9.565: The singles from 2.460-4.433 were to percussion, not guitar. There is no percussion present here.
- 1:12.427: There is a piano 16th triplet starting at 1:12.328, which this is part of.
- 2:00.308: oops forgot to remove this lol, was experimenting with patterns
- 2:07.672: I think this sound is striking enough that the jack is merited
- 2:30.853: "not being like"? because it's on the other hand? or because of the additional anchor to the guitar?
- 3:28.308: filling out all the 16ths here would imo make the entire section messy. There is a very distinct synth playing at the time of the missing 16ths which overpowers them, and this is not present at e.g. 3:32.126-3:32.672. The 16ths we do have in are also much louder.
- 3:44.672: thank m0nkeyz ;)
- 3:52.853: Done, now cycles through 3 or 4 variants.
- 4:20.490: It's way easier than an actual 4-note jack because of the column switch, don't really see the issue here

- 2:30.853: Not because it's on the other hand, but because I was expecting mirror'd pattern or at least the same usage of notes [jump, jump, hand] Which this iteration does not [HAND, jump, hand].

- 3:28.308: I marked it down missing as such because the 'louder' parts of it were stepped, but the quieter parts are not. You still have a 16th gap between patterns, so I seriously do not believe it would come across as 'messy', rather 'easy tech' for the par that the chart sets. Without them, the entire section plays like you are missing half the notes there.

I can overlook CQ flags @ 9 seconds, but There does need to be a fix for 3:28.308 & the associated section.

I don't like this, but it's not worth appealing.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 3671 => 3683
AVG NPS changed: 12.54471 => 12.58572
Hand Bias changed: -29 => -33