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Elif and the Night of Twilight :: FFR Batch Submission
VisD -
Elif and the Night of Twilight -
Se-U-Ra [6.5 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
PublicEvents
Released
Se-U-Ra blanket
(yeah the glissando about 1/3 of the way through is really 32nds, but let's be honest, 24ths like this are way more fun than another jumptrill :-))
(yeah the glissando about 1/3 of the way through is really 32nds, but let's be honest, 24ths like this are way more fun than another jumptrill :-))
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Elif and the Night of Twilight -Called- (VisD)" vs "Elif and the Night of Twilight (VisD)"
Simfile Folder Name
Elif and the Night of Twilight -Called- (VisD)Note Count
1392Chart Length
1:56Average NPS
12.3295Estimated Difficulty
84.56
First Note
0:04Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 4
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 16 3 - 24 4 - 190Jumps
x 270
Hands
x 80
Quads
x 2
Color Jumps
x 1
Color Hands
x 1
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
23 - 23.00 nps 2 Seconds
44 - 22.00 nps 5 Seconds
95 - 19.00 nps 10 Seconds
162 - 16.20 nps 30 Seconds
457 - 15.23 nps 1 Minute
851 - 14.18 nps
Color Count
x 645 (46.34%)
x 447 (32.11%)
x 46 (3.3%)
x 217 (15.59%)
x 9 (0.65%)
x 6 (0.43%)
x 2 (0.14%)
x 2 (0.14%)
x 18 (1.29%)
Posted at 6:06pm on May 6th, 2021
Elif and the Night of Twilight (VisD) [6.5/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.
-[00:09.994] I’m more ok with the second half of this burst rather than the first half, since the second half is more pronounced on the 12ths, where-as the first half is not. Plus, there’s a really annoying-to-parse 4[34][34]4 right hand anchor that makes this pretty rough to play.
(**)-[00:18.831] 16th is there, but very silent on 100% speed.
-[00:22.915] Jump where?
(**)-[00:31.752] This 16th minijack really doesn’t belong like the other 16th minijacks. There’s also one at 00:32.346, but is omitted because of quietness so I suggest the same here.
(**)-[00:44.673] Repeat note as 00:18.831, doesn’t really fit with the music on 100% speed.
(**)-[00:49.351] This is not a minijack at 100% speed.
-[00:50.019] With how aggressive minijack placement is for this chart, I’d argue that this 16th is a minijack.
(**)-[01:03.460 -> 01:04.054] Missing an entire roster of 16ths in here, starting on 8ths going to 4ths.
-[01:37.321] hand usage? Maybe?
(**)-[01:39.697 -> 01:42.965] This isn’t straight 16ths. (01:40.069, 01:40.514, 01:40.960, 01:41.108)
-[01:43.856] I’m not hearing the reasoning for specifically a 12th jack isolated to left hand here. Most prominent melodic notes for this burst are the 4ths & 8ths.
-Needs fixes in minijack patterning & 16ths that stick out at 100% speed, as well as some missing/ghost 16ths.
Posted at 2:48am on May 17th, 2021
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1375 => 1393
AVG NPS changed: 12.11454 => 12.33835
First Delay changed: 0:03 => 0:04
Hand Bias changed: -9 => 5
Posted at 2:51am on May 17th, 2021
Thanks for the notes. All fixes taken except for:
(**)-[00:44.673] Repeat note as 00:18.831, doesn’t really fit with the music on 100% speed.
> I definitely hear this; it's definitely a continuous 8-note played on the same key. It's a clear counterpoint to the later repetitions of 4 notes on the same key and having 6 notes (3x2 minijacks) doesn't make sense musically.
-[00:50.019] With how aggressive minijack placement is for this chart, I’d argue that this 16th is a minijack
> This note wasn't taken because the opposite thing was done (toned down the minijack placement for the less audible places like 49.351).
Also general layering fixes for clarity as alluded to by the review, such as ensuring that every bass kick = jump except for the more musically complicated sessions where there's a very distinct foreground melody running, or 16th hi-hat run, that take centerstage (then only jump in those places where melody is also present).
Posted at 7:16pm on June 1st, 2021
The minijack at [00:31.752] was never removed despite fix notes mentioning it should be fixed, but I will let it slide.
Posted at 7:44am on July 6th, 2021
Oops sorry - the "(**)-[00:44.673]" note I listed above was meant for [00:31.752] (i.e., keeping minijacks as sets of 4).
Posted at 7:44am on July 6th, 2021
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Elif and the Night of Twilight => Elif and the Night of Twilight -Called-
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Note Count changed: 1393 => 1392
AVG NPS changed: 12.33835 => 12.3295
Hand Bias changed: 5 => 4