Luv 5 Dancer :: FFR Batch Submission

bmah - Luv 5 Dancer - Colorful Sounds Port [8.5 / 10]

Nov/Dec 2020

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Released

Another bms song by Colorful Sounds Port, straightforward chart. This one sounds a lot like Cranky's rave music.
If accepted, fine with having this either as a public release OR a token.
IF TOKEN: I don't have any idea on what the token requirement should be, but I'd like it to be in reference to one of these songs: Forza Azzuri, JULIA, or JULIAN. I think a number of rhythms in this song are most similar to Forza Azzuri.

Simfile Folder Name

Luv 5 Dancer (bmah)

Note Count

982

Chart Length

1:44

Average NPS

9.7874

Estimated Difficulty

62.22

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 12

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 5 4 - 6

Jumps

								x 197
							

Hands

								x 55
							

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 1

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
29 - 14.50 nps 5 Seconds
65 - 13.00 nps 10 Seconds
122 - 12.20 nps 30 Seconds
335 - 11.17 nps 1 Minute
631 - 10.52 nps

Color Count

x 455 (46.33%)

x 257 (26.17%)

x 5 (0.51%)

x 243 (24.75%)

x 2 (0.2%)

x 14 (1.43%)

x 6 (0.61%)

x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.57s0.57s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s

Luv 5 Dancer
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- Perms, sync good.
** Is this by (an alias of) Colorful Sounds Port? According to the following page, it should be credited to The Dear Sexys: http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=List_def&event=67&sort=g&rev=on

- 6.049: Confused by these triplets, I can't really hear anything they could go to (except possibly the first one). Also, what happened to the 32nd at 6.383 which you were following earlier at e.g. 3.326?
- 24.870: This trill makes sense, but would feel more natural if you followed the vocal notes at 24.488 & 24.679 as well.
- 41.877, 90.794: These two notes have reversed PR, should be 43.
- 55.396: This 32nd should be at 55.300, see 9.440 for a correct example.
- 61.176, 61.367: Why are these omitted?
- 73.214: May want to make this a [123] hand to distinguish from the following trill. You do this at 67.100.

- This really does sound like Cranky, wow. Good chart, fun to play, not a whole lot to point out technically and what there is is pretty minor--6.049 is the only "significant" note. Clarification is needed on the song artist, however. [8.5/10]

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"** Is this by (an alias of) Colorful Sounds Port? According to the following page, it should be credited to The Dear Sexys: http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=List_def&event=67&sort=g&rev=on"
Huh...I never knew this. Yeah I guess so!

"- 6.049: Confused by these triplets, I can't really hear anything they could go to (except possibly the first one). Also, what happened to the 32nd at 6.383 which you were following earlier at e.g. 3.326?"
I heard it for sure back when I stepped this file, but reviewing it now, I'm having a hard time tracing back those sounds. I think for simplicity's sake I'll remove the 32nds. Even the other 32nds I'm leaving in elsewhere are a bit hard to hear, but marginally more so.

"- 24.870: This trill makes sense, but would feel more natural if you followed the vocal notes at 24.488 & 24.679 as well."
I see what you're saying, but I don't quite feel the need to justify pitch changes in this case. Can go either way, but I tend to be the person to omit these sort of pitch change elaborations.

"- 41.877, 90.794: These two notes have reversed PR, should be 43."
fixed

"- 55.396: This 32nd should be at 55.300, see 9.440 for a correct example."
"- 61.176, 61.367: Why are these omitted?"
See above notes; I just decided to remove all instances of 32nds as they're a bit too ambiguous.

"- 73.214: May want to make this a [123] hand to distinguish from the following trill. You do this at 67.100."
sure, changed

additional notes: The chorus sections actually have a number of "tack"-sounding percussion that I didn't notice before. I've decided to add them in for the second chorus to add some interest.

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A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 972 => 982
AVG NPS changed: 9.68771 => 9.78738
Hand Bias changed: 8 => 12

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NOTE: Ok, so a rough Google translation of the bms song description says:
"Nice to meet you. The Dear Sexys is a production unit consisting of Sexy No. 1 (Sound) and Sexy No. 2 (Movie).
Since it was a costume event, I was afraid to make a BMS that respected cranky.
It's a fairly high hurdle, but I tried to express it in my own way."

So it seems that 1) The Dear Sexys is the entirety of the song entry consisting of the musician and the movie/VJ. But the musician himself is Colorful Sounds Port; therefore I won't change the artist name. 2) And it's no surprise that indeed the song is homage to Cranky!

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