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Old 04-6-2007, 03:59 PM   #1
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Default For Her [Preview] (ps. yes another one)

OK, this is totally different from my normal style, so I need feedback on this one.

http://wickedawesomeful.com/music/itw/for_her.mp3

Suggestions, thoughts, rants?
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Old 04-6-2007, 04:18 PM   #2
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Default Re: For Her [Preview] (ps. yes another one)

The track is just BEGGING, and I mean BEGGING for a higher piano part to accompany it.

The string notes are very nice, but, they sound slightly distorted and a bit choppy, due to the lack of release, I guess. I'm not sure.

And for the rant:
WHY CAN EVERY WRITE SLOW ROMANTIC CRAP EXCEPT ME?!
YOU KNOW WHAT HAPPENED LAST TIME I WROTE ROMANCE
IT TURNED INTO METHRAI-F***ING-MOURET
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Old 04-6-2007, 04:23 PM   #3
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Default Re: For Her [Preview] (ps. yes another one)

I'll work with the piano. Also, I know what you mean about the strings. I think I can solve that problem by throwing some reverb on them.
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Old 04-6-2007, 10:12 PM   #4
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Oh snap double post

http://www.wickedawesomeful.com/music/itw/for_her.mp3

Fixed it up a bit

Lemme know what you think
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ha ha, I loved it! of course
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Old 04-7-2007, 01:15 AM   #6
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Finished.. I think

I'm still not happy with the part from 2:08 to 2:24.

http://www.wickedawesomeful.com/music/for_her.mp3

Anyway, I'm going to bed
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