Private Soulway

Aerogroove · 03-1-2007, 05:02 PM

This song is based off of an earlier song Gates of Heaven and will probably replace. This song is happy dancy, some vocoded lyrics:

http://www.aerogroove.com/songs/unaf...te_Soulway.mp3

Quote:

standing worlds apart
ive never felt closer
to anybody
than to you right now

wont you hold me
keep me close
give me your love
and i will hold it dear

give me a reason
give me your heart
show me a way
to open your soul

Tell me what you think of the song thanks!

**sleeplessdragn** · 03-1-2007, 05:36 PM

Kick could use a bit more thump. I have the same problem too, let me know why you think that is. Could just be trying to compress all of your instruments with too much level going through the compressor. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but like reduce the levels on everything and then apply compression to ramp it up. It might help your hats shine out better when you lots of layers going on.

I think your vocoder is clipping.

I thought the ending was kind of unexpected, because I REALLY REALLY wanted a return to that catchy synth string line.

I really like it though, it's SUPER catchy. The second half is my favorite part and it really makes me feel like I'm, as I said before, traveling through Tokyo with a cute(r) girl in a haze.

**iPatcH** · 03-1-2007, 05:39 PM

Definitely clippage with that vocoder there.

**Pyroshock** · 03-1-2007, 07:00 PM

Can't stop listening.

But yeah fix that vocoder.

Aerogroove · 03-1-2007, 07:17 PM

Oops, forgot the master channel treatment. I re-uploaded the new version. Please tell me if you think something doesnt sound right or just irks you, no matter how seemingly mundane or trivial let me know! thanks.

edit: k now I have uploaded the correct version.

wickedawesomeful · 03-1-2007, 07:20 PM

Oh wow, that was phenomenal. I'm hearing clipping on the snare/bass drum riff at like, 1:00, 1:24, and 2:51. Fix the clipping, and you have yourself an amazing song.

**sleeplessdragn** · 03-1-2007, 08:43 PM

Hahahaha, I need to talk to you about vocoders. TEACH ME!

= (

wickedawesomeful · 03-2-2007, 12:55 PM

I'm still hearing slight clipping at around 1:24, but it could just be my POS headphones.

-Fallen- · 03-2-2007, 06:52 PM

I love you AeroGroove

Still my favorite FFR artist.

EDIT: The vocals seem to be fine for me.

03-1-2007, 05:36 PM	#2
sleeplessdragn ~Bang that beat Harder~ FFR Simfile Author FFR Music Producer FFR Veteran Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 2,320	Re: Private Soulway Kick could use a bit more thump. I have the same problem too, let me know why you think that is. Could just be trying to compress all of your instruments with too much level going through the compressor. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but like reduce the levels on everything and then apply compression to ramp it up. It might help your hats shine out better when you lots of layers going on. I think your vocoder is clipping. I thought the ending was kind of unexpected, because I REALLY REALLY wanted a return to that catchy synth string line. I really like it though, it's SUPER catchy. The second half is my favorite part and it really makes me feel like I'm, as I said before, traveling through Tokyo with a cute(r) girl in a haze. __________________

03-1-2007, 05:39 PM	#3
iPatcH The One Electronic FFR Simfile Author FFR Veteran Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: DETROIT Age: 24 Posts: 3,200	Re: Private Soulway Definitely clippage with that vocoder there. __________________

03-1-2007, 07:00 PM	#4
Pyroshock ε=-dΦ/dt FFR Music Producer Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: College Station, TX Age: 21 Posts: 1,170	Re: Private Soulway Can't stop listening. But yeah fix that vocoder. __________________ http://pyroshock.bandcamp.com http://soundcloud.com/pyroshock

03-1-2007, 07:17 PM	#5
Aerogroove FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Santa Barbara, CA Age: 24 Posts: 140	Re: Private Soulway Oops, forgot the master channel treatment. I re-uploaded the new version. Please tell me if you think something doesnt sound right or just irks you, no matter how seemingly mundane or trivial let me know! thanks. edit: k now I have uploaded the correct version. __________________ Last edited by Aerogroove; 03-1-2007 at 07:24 PM..

03-1-2007, 07:20 PM	#6
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs FFR Music Producer Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 20 Posts: 3,888	Re: Private Soulway Oh wow, that was phenomenal. I'm hearing clipping on the snare/bass drum riff at like, 1:00, 1:24, and 2:51. Fix the clipping, and you have yourself an amazing song. __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

03-1-2007, 08:43 PM	#7
sleeplessdragn ~Bang that beat Harder~ FFR Simfile Author FFR Music Producer FFR Veteran Join Date: Jan 2004 Posts: 2,320	Re: Private Soulway Hahahaha, I need to talk to you about vocoders. TEACH ME! = ( __________________

03-2-2007, 12:55 PM	#8
wickedawesomeful Carls, Girls, & Drugs FFR Music Producer Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tosh's noose. Age: 20 Posts: 3,888	Re: Private Soulway I'm still hearing slight clipping at around 1:24, but it could just be my POS headphones. __________________ http://dozemusic.com/

03-2-2007, 06:52 PM	#9
-Fallen- I was here, at the start FFR Veteran Join Date: May 2005 Location: Canada Age: 25 Posts: 2,840	Re: Private Soulway I love you AeroGroove Still my favorite FFR artist. EDIT: The vocals seem to be fine for me. __________________ All stars could be brighter. All hearts could be warmer.

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