Why can't any of you just make a difference

**Herogashix** · 07-26-2012, 12:18 AM

I'm serious.

On a side note, new track. I know there's obvious issues with this, since it's a Herogayshit song, and I ran out of creative ideas, (I'll add that I'm looking for collaboration as well on this) but so far it's okay as a normal beat. I can't do dubstep or pseudostep for a god given shit.

http://soundcloud.com/thezeitgeistproject/make-a-difference

DjMeas · 07-26-2012, 12:51 AM

It's a bit rough on the ears when you have all your ideas coming into play towards the end up the track but there's definitely potential in this! I like your arps in the intro but the progress needs to be a bit more than just going from C to A#. Diversity, mix it up a bit!

Keep it up!

**jductape** · 07-26-2012, 12:55 AM

What program are you using?

**Frank Munoz** · 07-26-2012, 01:05 AM

It is... rough. But it is also a start~
Just work on your progressions more. (As in, just play with a piano, or with your program keyboard) Playing for fun helps tons.

Also, out of this whole composition, the most interesting part starts at 2:16 to the end.
I love it. I would use that in the beginning of a new piece, or even this one, and then reconstruct it over.

One more thing, if I were you asking for 'help', then I wouldn't worry about my production to much. I would focus on the notes, unique sounds(ex: 2:16 to the end), and neat rhythms or motifs.

07-26-2012, 12:51 AM	#2
DjMeas FFR Player Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 158	Re: Why can't any of you just make a difference It's a bit rough on the ears when you have all your ideas coming into play towards the end up the track but there's definitely potential in this! I like your arps in the intro but the progress needs to be a bit more than just going from C to A#. Diversity, mix it up a bit! Keep it up! __________________ http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

07-26-2012, 12:55 AM	#3
jductape 500+250+50-300-15+1000+rs FFR Veteran Join Date: Dec 2007 Age: 23 Posts: 238	Re: Why can't any of you just make a difference What program are you using?

07-26-2012, 01:05 AM	#4
Frank Munoz Oniderp FFR Veteran Join Date: Nov 2007 Age: 19 Posts: 1,444	Re: Why can't any of you just make a difference It is... rough. But it is also a start~ Just work on your progressions more. (As in, just play with a piano, or with your program keyboard) Playing for fun helps tons. Also, out of this whole composition, the most interesting part starts at 2:16 to the end. I love it. I would use that in the beginning of a new piece, or even this one, and then reconstruct it over. One more thing, if I were you asking for 'help', then I wouldn't worry about my production to much. I would focus on the notes, unique sounds(ex: 2:16 to the end), and neat rhythms or motifs. __________________

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