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Old 09-26-2008, 10:23 PM   #1
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Default Best song I'll make in a while.

I'd really appreciate it if you gave it a listen. It's a little melody I made up today and I think it's really nice. Tried to convey some emotion behind it.

ps the ending is really cliche

Looking for a mp3 conversion if possible. sorry for mistakes, i get nervous when recording.

Done on a yamaha ypg-625

http://www.sendspace.com/file/2ds85k


ps those who view the thread, i'd really enjoy feedback and criticism.
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Old 09-27-2008, 08:32 AM   #2
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thanks mate,


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If you want the best midi converter, search for synthfont.
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It was simple, of course, but not very engaging. Some of the parts, other than the parts that had a jazz-like rhythm, just felt like random notes that did not really have a rhythm. Keep working on it. Try to give those weird parts a better rhythm, and maybe make the song a little shorter; it felt too long and repetitive.
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It was simple, of course, but not very engaging. Some of the parts, other than the parts that had a jazz-like rhythm, just felt like random notes that did not really have a rhythm. Keep working on it. Try to give those weird parts a better rhythm, and maybe make the song a little shorter; it felt too long and repetitive.
i definitely felt like i dragged it out, i do plan on working with it more, maybe varying structure a bit, because they're isnt too many possibilities with how the song sounds right now.

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