poem a day

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  • moches
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2005
    • 3996

    #31
    Re: poem a day

    today's poem comes from an argument. tried to work in some of the meter and rhythm comments axith mentioned.

    i love you

    i love you, you cried
    as you dragged me away
    i can’t see you hurt, dear
    i won’t let you stray

    i love you, you cooed
    as you rocked me to sleep
    hush hush, little baby
    your soul’s mine to keep

    i love you, you screamed
    hurling words in outrage
    how'd did you grow out of
    this snug little cage

    i love you
    you whisper
    voice fading away
    it hurts on my own
    please
    i need you to stay

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