Re: poem a day
today's poem comes from an argument. tried to work in some of the meter and rhythm comments axith mentioned.
today's poem comes from an argument. tried to work in some of the meter and rhythm comments axith mentioned.
i love you
i love you, you cried
as you dragged me away
i can’t see you hurt, dear
i won’t let you stray
i love you, you cooed
as you rocked me to sleep
hush hush, little baby
your soul’s mine to keep
i love you, you screamed
hurling words in outrage
how'd did you grow out of
this snug little cage
i love you
you whisper
voice fading away
it hurts on my own
please
i need you to stay
i love you, you cried
as you dragged me away
i can’t see you hurt, dear
i won’t let you stray
i love you, you cooed
as you rocked me to sleep
hush hush, little baby
your soul’s mine to keep
i love you, you screamed
hurling words in outrage
how'd did you grow out of
this snug little cage
i love you
you whisper
voice fading away
it hurts on my own
please
i need you to stay
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