My first composed song.

[Mans0n]

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/sims/index.php?songid=28398
Is the link to the song. I MADE the whole song using Samplitude Music Studio 14. You can record songs/sounds. Its a really awesome program.
You can save your stuff as, .ogg/.wav/.mp3.
But anways I would like some feedback on my first song ever.
the song actually ends at 1:43 I think.
Enjoy!

[Commandersa1]

Why did you upload to the simfile database? Upload it to something you can stream from. It's ok for a first, I guess. Too much stuff is going on at once though. Meh...

[Beethovens mask]

That was really cool. What bass was that at the end?

[Mans0n]

I dont know anything i can upload too.

[Coolboyrulez0]

I really like the melody but you need to town down the stuff in the background a little bit... too much going on. Also upload your song to soundclick.com or newgrounds.com I have mine at soundclick :) Keep making songs ! [If you fix it a little bit I can try to step it and send it to FFR :D]