DJ Pyroshock - Axon

[g0ldenSun11]

Just finished this yesterday, I had started it about 2 months ago and just stopped making it for awhile, but decided a couple days ago to open it up and finish it. C&C please.

http://info.conroe.isd.tenet.edu/~chambtay/AxonV2.mp3

Please vote "hot" for it on my SoundClick site (www.soundclick.com/bands/4/djpyroshockmusic.htm).

[Aerogroove]

You're not having those horrible volume/compression problems like the other song, so thats good.
The intro sounds nice, some background stings or pads would sound good with it.
The song is a little empty on the low end, a heavier bd and deeper bass I think would cure this, and mabye some more percussion to help move the song.
nice song all in all

[g0ldenSun11]

Double post - delete this one

[g0ldenSun11]

Ok, I added a different bd, an octave lower bass along with the regular bass, and an octave lower on the trance part instrument with the regular one, plus some pads and a quiet synth cello at the intro.

http://info.conroe.isd.tenet.edu/~chambtay/AxonV2.mp3

[Aerogroove]

I think a brighter string would work better, and mabye bring the volume up gradually as opposed to just starting off at full volume.
sounds good

[alainbryden]

Oh wow, I really like the sounds of this song. It really feels like it has a story, or at least a mood to it. Well done.

[g0ldenSun11]

*bump*

Please vote hot on SoundClick.