New Song Act 1

[DJSBX]

This is my latest, song. It was a project I was doing for a friend. She had to choose some songs to reflect certain acts in a play she was reading so I made a song for act 1, and I think it turned out really good. Criticism please.

Act 1 - DJSBX (http://members.shaw.ca/djsbxmusic2/Act%201%20-%20DJSBX.mp3)

[DJSBX]

anything?

[Varia]

I can't give you technical comments or anything because I don't make music.

It was, however, really nice to listen to. It sounded kind of SGX style and was pretty entertaining to listen to. I really liked the beginning and the ending. The guitar that comes in at around 1:00 didn't really seem to fit, though. I mean, the intro part of the guitar. The beginning of that guitar part sounded really odd. But yeah, pretty good song. Keep up the good work.

[DJSBX]

hm yes good stuff