Tell Me What You think..

[DJSBX]

I made this in FL.. its one of my first... my first good ones anyways (been FLing for about 2 months) so tell me what you think. And please give me some constructive criticim. Thanks

http://www.angelfire.com/music6/urs/In_To_The_Darkness__Phazed_Mix_.mp3

[altimadale]

i like it

[Omeganitros]

That was....that was actually pretty good!

I like this piece, it sounds like you knew excatly what you want to do in the song and then did it.

My only complaint/criticism/advice is to try and get better instruments, and find something that doesnt...doesnt....what's the word I'm looking for? It's something you can control in some of the instrument in Jeskola Buzz. I think it's Resonance. Something that will keep the lead instrument from spiking out loudness at the beginning of each note. It would make it much much better, without getting rid of the dark atmosphere. Oh, and maybe improved drums/bass.

Very good song, escepially for two months. You got potential, man.

[Afrobean]

It sounds pretty good, but the bass sucks. It sounds terrible (the bass that is). Also, get different instruments like Mr. Ω said.

[SuperGreenX]

Turn that volume down, man! JEEZE. This thing is clipping so hard. Just turn the master volume down a lot.

The breaks at 1:45 have the potential to be kinda cool....if I could hear it through the clipping.