Circus Beat

[flypie743]

New song made in FL by me:

http://members.lycos.co.uk/flypie743/Circus%20Beat.mp3

EDIT: because lycos is being stupid, you have to copy and paste the link into a new browser window to hear it.

[Afrobean]

You're always saying how you don't want your songs to be too crowded, but this one seems great. The vibraslap is a little overused, though. I don't know what it is about it though, but this just seems really weird. I do like it though. I just suggest taking out a lot of the vibraslaps. Also, I am seeing progress in this when compared to your previous works. So, to reiterate, good job.

wow... my thoughts usually flow a lot better than this...

[flypie743]

You're always saying how you don't want your songs to be too crowded, but this one seems great.

Yeah, well I said cluttered =/...meaning like I didnt want it all jumbled up, like just putting in notes weirdly.

[flypie743]

bump

[evilbutterfly]

Everything Afro said + longer + more variance throughout the song + few cymbols

It might also help to increase the volume on whatever the melody is. Mostly, this song seems to just repeat the same stuff over and over. Vary it up a little.

And life Afro said, you're getting better. You still have plenty of room for improvement, though.