Trying to break away from trance

[Pyroshock]

This is NOWHERE near finished, but I'd like some comments nonetheless. You can obviously here the trance influences still in it, but I'm trying to diverge from those tendencies and broaden myself

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6996927&q=hi

The calm down after the first crescendo is where I'm going to introduce the melody, but that is as of yet unwritten

[Zageron]

Use newgrounds or something so we don't have to use up our IP downloads on MEGAUPLOAD. :(

About Song:
Beginning was much to quiet. After the quiet part the difference is too big, it blasts my speakers and I have to turn them back down. A little repetitive, but I guess that's the point.

Good overall. :]

[Pyroshock]

Haha sorry, just applied for a Newgrounds thing I'll edit the post when I'm approved by the moderator.

I made the crescendo a little less extreme, see how that sounds. Still haven't written the melody, nothing has come to me yet

Thanks

[Pyroshock]

OK whatever Newgrounds is taking forever to be approved so I put it on Soundclick

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6996927&q=hi