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FFR Player
Join Date: Aug 2005
Location: awsome
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FFR Player
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it's www.o2jam.com.my
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new hand moves = dab
Join Date: Dec 2002
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Pretty good. Some of the 16ths were questionable, and the jumps weren't completely consistent, but it was definitely good. One thing to look out for in the future is to make sure you don't overstep the ending. The gallops to the piano at the end were unnecessary. Also, you should've stopped where the drums n' such came back at the end, instead of stepping a little of the loop and then stopping. It just makes the ending feel awkward.
Really nice for a first serious attempt. I'll keep an eye out for your sims in the future. |
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