10-21-2003, 12:52 AM
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Boredom..... Boredom...
God, I'm bored.... So so bored... Do you wanna know how bored? Bored enough that I wrote a poem....
(F.A.G.G.O.T) I am a shell. Nothing more Inside I am empty, outside is tough When you brush me I feel nothing You squeeze my heart I do not twinge But you don’t, you walk on by without a word without a sound In my direction Your gaze now falls now that you know my truth Inside my shell buried deep inside below the nothing below the haze and fog You speak to me you pierce me through I feel the hurt of one small word: (This below is where I got the title from) Feel All Grating Gazes Open Towards everything in your face You hate you loathe I feel I cower You’ve pierced me now I bleed Now it flows free Free but not For I am not My shell is thicker than before But too thick and now caves in The shards I pick and to run me through I am through See? That's how bored I was.... *sigh* I wish I had something better to do.... But I don't....Well, I suppose I could have spent the past 7 minutes playing ffr... but my fingers are getting bogged down from te repittion... I'm thinking too much... I tihnk I'll go to bed... God I'm bored...
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mike ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ \"I don\'t understand the part where Diane blacked out and woke up spooning with her maid.\" \"Diane didn\'t do that, you did.\" \"Oh, yeah, that makes more sense.\" |
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10-21-2003, 01:03 AM
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You know somethings wrong when you start writing poetry for the heck of it :P.
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10-21-2003, 05:39 AM
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weeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! i'm bored! cause I'm going to school in 10 minutes!
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10-21-2003, 08:07 AM
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umm why did you make a poem called ******? Are you telling us something about yourself?
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10-21-2003, 10:30 AM
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Let's not be hatin, and another useless, and nobody would care post from Yanah God.
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10-21-2003, 10:31 AM
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Are you in on my boycott?
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10-21-2003, 11:29 AM
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10-21-2003, 12:21 PM
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...wow..thats very..intersting..??
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10-21-2003, 12:35 PM
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I like it moogy! Goodjob!
I used to write poetr...the evil kind while i was depressed now i just blast music... |
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10-21-2003, 12:37 PM
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..oO; haha. thats cool...same here sometimes.
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10-21-2003, 02:31 PM
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hmmm guess that word filter is working
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10-21-2003, 02:58 PM
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10-21-2003, 04:36 PM
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most likely.
oh and by the way, you are bored man. damn. Even i havn't sunk that low. |
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10-21-2003, 04:47 PM
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I don't like poetry that terribly much (I strongly prefer a good book), but this isn't all that bad, particularly if you read into it, instead of simply over it.
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10-21-2003, 04:52 PM
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I've seen some pretty bad ones from u
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bball, pretty mad whats from who now? You're once again not being very specific...
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