EYEROLLAZ

**Mans0n** · 06-23-2011, 12:10 PM

Here are my 2 exclusive EYEROLLAZ tracks, check em out and let me know what you think.

http://soundcloud.com/mans0n/euphori...lite-eyerollaz

http://soundcloud.com/mans0n/skrub-eyerollaz

**midnghtraver** · 06-23-2011, 01:46 PM

For the first one:

That vocal that comes in at :20 is annoying as hell, and counters the description. The samples you used are pretty good though, I like how they flowed. If I were you I might spend some time working on sound design alone. Some of your synths sound like you just grabbed a preset and tweaked maybe one or two things. Your melodies do work though. I'd call this progressive house though instead of trance (not important). That pause at 2:45 is a little awkward...

Second Track:

Same thing with this vocal, its much too overused. Using vocals from the Vengeance Vocal Essentials is probably usually the wrong move. Your samples would be good if that high hat wasn't so loud, it was kinda painful just cause of how loud the high end was. The kick is good, maybe throw on an EQ to boost the punchyness a little and take out the sub a bit, that would also help with compressing. The boing synth in my opinion is kinda weird, but you shouldn't take it out. I'm also noticing that the snare is too loud. At 3:43 (I'm guessing its the main breakdown) I really dislike that style of music, but I can say its good from listening to beatports top 100. The Melodies in this one don't work as well as in you last one.

What is EYEROLLAZ?

06-23-2011, 12:10 PM	#1
Mans0n Sun and Stars Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Central Californ.i.a. Age: 29 Posts: 2,907	EYEROLLAZ Here are my 2 exclusive EYEROLLAZ tracks, check em out and let me know what you think. http://soundcloud.com/mans0n/euphori...lite-eyerollaz http://soundcloud.com/mans0n/skrub-eyerollaz __________________ http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P

06-23-2011, 01:46 PM	#2
midnghtraver Icarus Moth Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: NYC Age: 28 Posts: 2,064	Re: EYEROLLAZ For the first one: That vocal that comes in at :20 is annoying as hell, and counters the description. The samples you used are pretty good though, I like how they flowed. If I were you I might spend some time working on sound design alone. Some of your synths sound like you just grabbed a preset and tweaked maybe one or two things. Your melodies do work though. I'd call this progressive house though instead of trance (not important). That pause at 2:45 is a little awkward... Second Track: Same thing with this vocal, its much too overused. Using vocals from the Vengeance Vocal Essentials is probably usually the wrong move. Your samples would be good if that high hat wasn't so loud, it was kinda painful just cause of how loud the high end was. The kick is good, maybe throw on an EQ to boost the punchyness a little and take out the sub a bit, that would also help with compressing. The boing synth in my opinion is kinda weird, but you shouldn't take it out. I'm also noticing that the snare is too loud. At 3:43 (I'm guessing its the main breakdown) I really dislike that style of music, but I can say its good from listening to beatports top 100. The Melodies in this one don't work as well as in you last one. What is EYEROLLAZ?

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