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Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/420015
My first actual DnB track! so please comments, advice, criticism please! I would like to improve it some if i can. Made with FL 8 XXL just in case. Thanks FFR. UPDATED! clear cache and delete cookies to listen to changes made.
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05-13-2011, 05:23 AM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
Hey that's pretty original for a first try. The snare is too dry at some moments though and it tends to get too much repetitive after the half of the song.
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05-13-2011, 05:28 AM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
Snare is great, love the sound of the kit. It's got drums, but it's missing bass, if you get what I mean.
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05-13-2011, 10:37 AM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
Definitely know what you mean Spook, And am still adding stuff to improve the quality.
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05-13-2011, 03:39 PM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
This isn't a jive!
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05-13-2011, 06:13 PM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
Drums need some EQ work. The super-upper highs are REALLY piercing, and the mids seem a bit muffled. Sounds almost as if there's a band reject filter on the drums. This is really, really good for a first try though. Keep at it.
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05-15-2011, 12:00 AM
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Sun and Stars
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
thanks, definitely will do!
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05-17-2011, 03:23 PM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
I like the atmosphere a lot overall. Don't really know much about producing dnb, but I like what comes in at 1:01. The bass kinda hurts my ears at the very beginning, and when the higher frequencies cut off, but that's probably just my headphone setup :P I do like how the bass stays while the other instruments cutoff/soften though. It's cool overall, a lot better than my first dnb track would probably be.
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05-17-2011, 03:57 PM
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Re: Patashu Jive (DnB Track)
That was pretty good... did you fruity slice loops? (random question)
The highs are just a littttle much, and I agree that the mids are muffled. It gets somewhat disorganized but that could clear up when the EQ changes the sound a bit. Pretty decent for a first try.
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