Haiku

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 08:16 AM

-Please post some of your haikus here

-heres a haiku called: Autumn Breeze

The autumn breeze blows,
maple leafs float through the air,
a warm season breeze.

FictionJunction · 08-1-2008, 08:25 AM

I through the ball threw the wall

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 08:30 AM

that was a classic
good job

**MrPoptart** · 08-1-2008, 08:33 AM

Haikus are really weird
and sometimes do not make sence
refrigerator

=D

omgitznpv · 08-1-2008, 08:38 AM

at least spell sense right
for otherwise you seem dumb
good job ya poptart

**MrPoptart** · 08-1-2008, 08:41 AM

Firefox built in spell checker did it automatically -.-

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 08:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by omgitznpv

at least spell sense right
for otherwise you seem dumb
good job ya poptart

very good

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 08:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrPoptart

Haikus are really weird
and sometimes do not make sence
refrigerator

=D

XD refrigerator

Crashfan3 · 08-1-2008, 11:53 AM

TH_XD, what some of the people are trying to get across is that you have major spelling errors in your second line, if you didn't already notice.

Since I'm posting, I might as well write one.

Ancient runes of old
Magic within never dies
Yet is lost for all

Ecchh... I suck. -_-

**All_That_Chaz** · 08-1-2008, 12:28 PM

What would Jesus do?
Probably get crucified.
He was good at that.

Tater Tot · 08-1-2008, 01:36 PM

Chaz, if I remember correctly, you used that same haiku in the haiku competition I held about a year ago.

I haven't done a haiku in forever, but here I go,

Haiku's wasting time
Producing all of these rhymes
Makes me want to cry.

Nice to see a new interest in them.
And not to bash MrPoptart, but the whole refridgerator haiku is pretty played out...
Not that mine is much better.

awesome13 · 08-1-2008, 02:21 PM

lol i have quite a few haikus (although i'm not that good at typing them...i hate limiting the stanzas to 5/7/5. ) Anyway, here are a few...

Tonight the stars shine
Showing off their radiance
Exhilarating

A rainbow appears
With colors of all textures
Dazzling all souls

Lately, life is hell
Engulfing me in its grasp
Never to release

A broken heart heals
Trying to forget the pain
But the pain still clings

Thunder roars outside
Lightning lights up the night sky
As rain falls quickly

...i think i type better poems than haikus...idk...oh, and TakeHayashi XD; your haiku was really good

lol and so was MrPoptart's

**Gibson63** · 08-1-2008, 02:25 PM

wtf is haiku..

awesome13 · 08-1-2008, 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gibson63

wtf is haiku..

a haiku is a type of poem, but the stanzas have to start with 5 words, then the next is 7, and then 5 again.

TakeHayashi_XD · 08-1-2008, 02:42 PM

i have errors, oh well i tried

NFD · 08-1-2008, 03:09 PM

World's are falling off
Like rain in a paper cup
All the universe

Shortened version of lyrics to my favourite song, but it works.

-Yukari- · 08-1-2008, 03:10 PM

Cool breeze; ocean spray
Blowing through my hair all day
I think... I will stay

GWC_heyitsmee · 08-1-2008, 03:13 PM

i think this thread sucks balls
going to play some ffr right now
you can haiku some more

jx nice thread
i am so vulgar

**customstuff** · 08-1-2008, 03:15 PM

I have never tried
to write a haiku poem
but now I just did

Arrows up and down
falling 'til they hit the ground
AAA'd that song

these 5 syllables
and these 7 syllables
make 12 syllables

flargelgargelchi
welnikamidorflomil
resherfungersmorf

-Yukari- · 08-1-2008, 03:16 PM

Heyitsmee you didn't use the 5-7-5 format, customstuff neither did you and you spelled haiku wrong.

08-1-2008, 08:16 AM	#1
TakeHayashi_XD FFR Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: Florida Age: 29 Posts: 136	Haiku -Please post some of your haikus here -heres a haiku called: Autumn Breeze The autumn breeze blows, maple leafs float through the air, a warm season breeze. __________________ ~READY.AIM.FIRE!!~ .hack//roots Last edited by TakeHayashi_XD; 08-1-2008 at 02:41 PM..

08-1-2008, 08:30 AM	#3
TakeHayashi_XD FFR Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: Florida Age: 29 Posts: 136	Re: Haiku that was a classic good job __________________ ~READY.AIM.FIRE!!~ .hack//roots

08-1-2008, 11:53 AM	#9
Crashfan3 FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Jefferson, Ore. Age: 32 Posts: 2,937	Re: Haiku TH_XD, what some of the people are trying to get across is that you have major spelling errors in your second line, if you didn't already notice. Since I'm posting, I might as well write one. Ancient runes of old Magic within never dies Yet is lost for all Ecchh... I suck. -_- __________________ Twilight Sparkle's Ponyville Group Free Chiptune Streaming Radio! Thanks justin_ator and megamon88 for making my sig 20% cooler.

08-1-2008, 01:36 PM	#11
Tater Tot FFR Player Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: The Fountain Of Youth, Florida Posts: 582	Ahhh... Memories..... Chaz, if I remember correctly, you used that same haiku in the haiku competition I held about a year ago. I haven't done a haiku in forever, but here I go, Haiku's wasting time Producing all of these rhymes Makes me want to cry. Nice to see a new interest in them. And not to bash MrPoptart, but the whole refridgerator haiku is pretty played out... Not that mine is much better.

08-1-2008, 02:21 PM	#12
awesome13 FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: none of your business Age: 30 Posts: 9	Re: Haiku lol i have quite a few haikus (although i'm not that good at typing them...i hate limiting the stanzas to 5/7/5. ) Anyway, here are a few... Tonight the stars shine Showing off their radiance Exhilarating A rainbow appears With colors of all textures Dazzling all souls Lately, life is hell Engulfing me in its grasp Never to release A broken heart heals Trying to forget the pain But the pain still clings Thunder roars outside Lightning lights up the night sky As rain falls quickly ...i think i type better poems than haikus...idk...oh, and TakeHayashi XD; your haiku was really good lol and so was MrPoptart's Last edited by awesome13; 08-1-2008 at 02:24 PM..

08-1-2008, 02:25 PM	#13
Gibson63 FFR Veteran Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Canada,Quebec Age: 32 Posts: 1,319	Re: Haiku wtf is haiku.. __________________

08-1-2008, 02:42 PM	#15
TakeHayashi_XD FFR Player Join Date: May 2008 Location: Florida Age: 29 Posts: 136	Re: Haiku i have errors, oh well i tried __________________ ~READY.AIM.FIRE!!~ .hack//roots

08-1-2008, 03:09 PM	#16
NFD FFR Player Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: I see us on a beach down in, Mexico Age: 30 Posts: 4,715	Re: Haiku World's are falling off Like rain in a paper cup All the universe Shortened version of lyrics to my favourite song, but it works. __________________

08-1-2008, 03:13 PM	#18
GWC_heyitsmee FFR Player Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 31	Re: Haiku i think this thread sucks balls going to play some ffr right now you can haiku some more jx nice thread i am so vulgar

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