The Tanka Thread ~

**CarrotCake94** · 12-2-2013, 02:36 PM

5 - This is the tanka
7 - thread you must only make words
5 - in the tanka way
7 - using five then seven then
7 - 5 then seven and seven

~~~~~

A Tanka for British Columbia
by CarrotCake94

Beautiful B.C.
Lovely Glacier-Capped Mountains
A Breathtaking Scene
Your Rivers are Cold and Clean
A Province that feels like Home

**Zageron** · 12-2-2013, 02:41 PM

bc is real cold
why is it so god damn cold
what the **** weather
just kidding i love it here
i roll around in this shit

**rushyrulz** · 12-2-2013, 02:46 PM

Dis a B.C. thread
What the hell is a Tanka?
Looks like a haiku
Except there's even more lines
What is this I don't even

GuidoHunter · 12-2-2013, 02:58 PM

The mora concept
Curiously Japanese
"Tanka" has three
We don't have it in English
But the OP is still wrong

--Guido

choof · 12-2-2013, 03:16 PM

a game to play
very frustrating to play
solo or singles
you know the name of the game
yes stepmania

**MixMasterLar** · 12-2-2013, 03:36 PM

Just holy shit man
I just came to realize that
Choofer is Torrent
I didn't know that before
I should read sigs more often

**soramimi** · 12-2-2013, 07:16 PM

The tanka is weird
It has way too many lines
And then, in the end
I just fill them with nonsense
Creamy butternut squash soup

**CarrotCake94** · 12-3-2013, 04:14 PM

After a long day
I finally close my screen
And yet I still hear
The rhythmic tapping of keys
To the wee hours of dawn

**CarrotCake94** · 12-3-2013, 05:06 PM

Open Flash Player
Wait for the game to load up
Log in to account
Hours and hours on end
Smashing keys and drinking pop

**omega_grunt666** · 12-3-2013, 05:16 PM

Photoshop all day
my throat is very sore, ow
is this a tanka
I guess it is, ok then
thanks for sharing this with us

**CarrotCake94** · 12-5-2013, 06:23 PM

As I watch the clock,
Every second that goes by,
Is a second lost.
A missed opportunity,
Didn't even say goodbye...

**CarrotCake94** · 12-7-2013, 04:10 PM

Sleep Tight

When I read arrows
on isolation and rates,
I understand them.
They're sending me a message.
I probably should go sleep...

**Funnygurl555** · 12-7-2013, 04:49 PM

Oh hey, this is cool,
But I don’t know what to write.
So um, hello there.
I’m Funnygurl555.
I should probably go now…

12-2-2013, 02:36 PM	#1
CarrotCake94 ~Cuddable Wagon~ Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 278	The Tanka Thread ~ 5 - This is the tanka 7 - thread you must only make words 5 - in the tanka way 7 - using five then seven then 7 - 5 then seven and seven ~~~~~ A Tanka for British Columbia by CarrotCake94 Beautiful B.C. Lovely Glacier-Capped Mountains A Breathtaking Scene Your Rivers are Cold and Clean A Province that feels like Home __________________ Wagon~Wagon~Wagon

12-2-2013, 02:41 PM	#2
Zageron Zageron E. Tazaterra RRR Developer & DevOps Support Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: BC Age: 32 Posts: 6,586	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ bc is real cold why is it so god damn cold what the **** weather just kidding i love it here i roll around in this shit __________________ Help Develop FFR

12-2-2013, 02:46 PM	#3
rushyrulz Digital Dancing! Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: 80 billion club, NE Age: 31 Posts: 12,980	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Dis a B.C. thread What the hell is a Tanka? Looks like a haiku Except there's even more lines What is this I don't even __________________

12-2-2013, 03:16 PM	#5
choof Banned Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 8,563	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ a game to play very frustrating to play solo or singles you know the name of the game yes stepmania

12-2-2013, 03:36 PM	#6
MixMasterLar Beach Bum Extraordinaire Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: The Emerald Coast Posts: 5,211	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Just holy shit man I just came to realize that Choofer is Torrent I didn't know that before I should read sigs more often __________________ Facebook / Youtube / Twitter .

12-2-2013, 07:16 PM	#7
soramimi Cat Army Coordinator Join Date: Jul 2013 Age: 36 Posts: 333	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ The tanka is weird It has way too many lines And then, in the end I just fill them with nonsense Creamy butternut squash soup __________________

12-3-2013, 04:14 PM	#8
CarrotCake94 ~Cuddable Wagon~ Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 278	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ After a long day I finally close my screen And yet I still hear The rhythmic tapping of keys To the wee hours of dawn __________________ Wagon~Wagon~Wagon

12-3-2013, 05:06 PM	#9
CarrotCake94 ~Cuddable Wagon~ Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 278	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Open Flash Player Wait for the game to load up Log in to account Hours and hours on end Smashing keys and drinking pop __________________ Wagon~Wagon~Wagon

12-3-2013, 05:16 PM	#10
omega_grunt666 Nescio quid faciam Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Edmonton, AB Posts: 892	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Photoshop all day my throat is very sore, ow is this a tanka I guess it is, ok then thanks for sharing this with us __________________

12-5-2013, 06:23 PM	#11
CarrotCake94 ~Cuddable Wagon~ Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 278	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ As I watch the clock, Every second that goes by, Is a second lost. A missed opportunity, Didn't even say goodbye... __________________ Wagon~Wagon~Wagon

12-7-2013, 04:10 PM	#12
CarrotCake94 ~Cuddable Wagon~ Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 278	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Sleep Tight When I read arrows on isolation and rates, I understand them. They're sending me a message. I probably should go sleep... __________________ Wagon~Wagon~Wagon

12-7-2013, 04:49 PM	#13
Funnygurl555 T-Force's Rival Join Date: Dec 2010 Age: 27 Posts: 1,865	Re: The Tanka Thread ~ Oh hey, this is cool, But I don’t know what to write. So um, hello there. I’m Funnygurl555. I should probably go now…

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