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[cetaka]

when u say good stpemania file making...who are you referring to..

[HighAndr0id]

he is referring to me and my inherent ability to **** over any song i chose to make a file out of.

[omgitznpv]

i had to write like a 500 word essay probably more actually for one of his sims

[omgitznpv]

this lol

hey its 833 words



omgitznpv writes...
at 9:21:07am on 3/30/08
At m154, keep everything as holds or nothing as holds.
The 16ths in this part make no sense. Fix.
The PR during that part is kind-of off, a few on the 8ths and some on the 16ths. Try for it.
At the end, m167, it's awkward on the 3rd-4th beat. There is no jump to put a sound to on m168.
It seems like it's worse than before because this time I felt like pointing out almost everything :O

omgitznpv writes...
at 9:20:48am on 3/30/08
The PR from m54-57 is horrid. Fix it up. Also, keep it as holds.
m70-71- you have a jump-hold on the 4th beat of m70, but the same sound repeats and you have a single hold after that. Make the 2nd one a jump-hold as well.
m71-72 has terrible PR. Fix.
Start the 16ths on m74, not as a pick-up to it- this is up to you, but personally it's really weird to me. Also, inconsistency during this next part. The first time you had it without jumps, now you have jumps to the same thing. Again, check your PR here. Starting at m90, keep it as all jumps or all single arrows to the piano. It's also a good idea to layer with the accompaniment from the piano.
I don't like the jack at m93.
At m95, there is a 16th right after the start of the beat.
The PR at m102 seems really awkward to me.
Right before m105, there is a 16th.
m106- keep it as jumps. Also, layer the syncopated clap later.
At m153, it's still really misrhythmed. Slow the music down (0.3x is good) and sync it there.
At

omgitznpv writes...
at 9:20:26am on 3/30/08
Make the 8ths of the melody holds or jumps (I don't suggest both though. Also, a jumpstream works but not as well. I personally like the holds more). In addition, the 16th patterns there shouldn't be identical. Mix them up. Vary them up. It gets really repetitive, boring, and annoying. At m41, add the 16ths with the jumps (keep it the same pattern between each up; i.e. (46)828(46)828(46)828). The first beat of m42 works better as a (46) jump followed by an arrow on 4 (PR purposes). Once the new melody kicks in on the 2nd beat of m42, make EVERYTHING holds. Keep it consistent. To keep it a little more interested, there is a syncopated clap sound- beats 2 and 4 of the measures here (the upbeats). When there is no new hold on the beat, keep the clap as a jump. You also have a few PR problems as well.
At m52-ish, along with making everything holds, the lengths are wrong. Nothing ends on a 16th- hold them out for their full value (you have 16th holds that should be 8th holds)

omgitznpv writes...
at 9:19:33am on 3/30/08
Do it both times, or don't have them there at all. In addition, I really suggest layering this area. You just did pretty decent layering before this part, and this part has a distinct melody over the harmony. If you are going to keep some of those longer holds in there, check their length. A few are incorrect.
The PR is a tad off at the 8th jump/hold right before measure 17- you had a highlowhighlow thing going on, and the 8th jump was a higher pitch than the previous one. Make it a jump for the right hand or so, instead (I suggest a (28) or (26) jump).
The transition from m25-26 is terrible. The 16ths at the end of m25 don't really go to anything distinct, and it will be very awkward unless you remove the holds in the previous section of the song and layer it with the 16ths. Starting at m26, you break up the consistent 16th rhythm with the 8th note melody. If you're going to do that, you should bring the melody out more for emphasis and less awkwardness. Make the 8ths of th

omgitznpv writes...
at 9:19:13am on 3/30/08
Okay. I'm stating these as I go along. Also, if one part repeats during the song, it applies to the repeats also. As a note, if you don't know what 4268 arrows are, look at the numpad. 4=left, 2=down, 8=up, 6=right
Right on measure 2, if you're going to keep it as a jump, make it as a hand. It's loud and there's enough notes in the chord to warrant it. However, I suggest stepping the new background noise right after the start of the measure (the 8ths).
At measure 5, the 2 jumps you have to the claps lead right to another same (46) jump to the chord again. The chord is much louder than the jumps, so make that a hand.
Start the chain at the beginning of measure 6, not in the middle of it. That's where the sound begins. Also, during the chain, it's a little left-hand biased. My right hand is not really doing anything, so shove some arrows over.
At measure 10, the holds don't make sense. The sound repeats twice, but you only put the hold there the second time. Do it both ti

[HighAndr0id]

i recall it being longer, although it was helpful and i am thankful that you wrote it.

ps. you da greetest. also want to write another essay

[omgitznpv]

w/e guys play my newest sim and post scores because i want to see scores

warning: sim is generic and repetitive

[HighAndr0id]

uhhhh D: to hungover to play anything with sound sorry

[bender5]

not npv's file

[pastapiggy]

Originally Posted by omgitznpv

w/e guys play my newest sim and post scores because i want to see scores

warning: sim is mosaic.wav

no

[omgitznpv]

****

[omgitznpv]

gad dam what made me think my file would be an incredibly easy AAA

[behanjc]

I tried to download it and the zip wouldn't open. "start of central directory not found. Zip file corrupt." Problem on my end?

EDIT: OK I think it worked in WinRAR (as opposed to WinZip)
but you should still try to fix this because lots of people just use WinZip.

[iCeCuBEz v2]

Originally Posted by Sprite-

gud ma for me
marisa hvy (44/1)

you beat my billion year old score by 1 perfect

dam

[omgitznpv]

Originally Posted by behanjc

I tried to download it and the zip wouldn't open. "start of central directory not found. Zip file corrupt." Problem on my end?

EDIT: OK I think it worked in WinRAR (as opposed to WinZip)
but you should still try to fix this because lots of people just use WinZip.

I have no idea why it would do that. Is there a possible way to make it work otherwise? I simply zipped it and uploaded it- should I re-zip it?

[pastapiggy]

No, its an ffr problem because i cant download any sims from the database and I haven't been able to for a few days (I get the same message).

[omgitznpv]

Oh, okay

[blve23]

this song is really cool have you guys ever played it forget da score



also last night wow

[HighAndr0id]

this mad me happy and sad all at once D:

[midare]

make gfx for my file npv :S

ps. wtf get a better score on your file mr. MA i just got 50/1 fc sightread :S

[iCeCuBEz v2]

Originally Posted by blve23

this song is really cool have you guys ever played it forget da score



also last night wow

wow