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Old 04-28-2014, 01:04 PM   #1
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Default My emo "Mere Lost Love" poem.

I'm not gay I swear. But here's a poem I wrote.



Mere Lost Love

Oh how I miss the life that was bliss,
when I flew like dove which was once in love,
but that was the past, my first and my last,
whilst time came so fast heaven came to a crash!

I knew it wasn't smart I quickly gave her my heart,
but I believed from the start that we'd never fall apart,
thus tis a shame what to her was a game,
that I sit her in pain going merely insane.

But I do not regret, the first day we met,
to the last day we kissed that I'll never be missed.
Tis what it is which I indomitably accept,
because it'd be inconsequential to defy the concept.

Thus you live and you learn,
you give and you burn,
now and forever I'll never be a concern.

These thoughts that I dread,
because the memories wont leave my head.
God it's time for bed...
Because I'm nothing but dead....
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Old 04-28-2014, 06:30 PM   #2
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Old 04-28-2014, 06:45 PM   #3
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u gotta stop trippin over a b*tch she wasnt any good for u anyway (no homo)
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