Foreverland

**Cyanite** · 03-20-2009, 03:47 PM

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/ekrb

A reworked/renamed version of If We Could Touch The Sky. This drops anything about it that was minimalistic, it's now more similar to my usual trance style.

I think the breakdown is currently one of the best things I've ever written, though I'd like to hear what you think.

The ending is very loud in this uploaded version, sorry about that.

Agent:Baby Jesus · 03-20-2009, 03:59 PM

downloading

i'll listen it to it when im done showering

**Pyroshock** · 03-26-2009, 04:56 PM

I really like it! It has a really pleasant atmosphere especially the breakdown. I just love the entire atmosphere you've made in it, it seems so light and

I think you need to turn down the volume a bit though the bass and just the entire mix quavers when it gets loud, and you should lighten up on the compression your transients are drowned out, particularly in the end

Ruritsu · 03-26-2009, 07:00 PM

I know nothing about making music, only listening, so I can't critique, but I liked the song enough to download it so thumbs up ^^

**Cyanite** · 03-28-2009, 10:13 AM

Thanks guys.

**tofurox** · 03-28-2009, 11:19 AM

Love it!

OMG its HIM · 03-28-2009, 01:13 PM

Sounds Good!

03-20-2009, 03:59 PM	#2
Agent:Baby Jesus Banned Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 65	Re: Foreverland downloading i'll listen it to it when im done showering

03-26-2009, 04:56 PM	#3
Pyroshock ε=-dΦ/dt Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: College Station, TX Age: 31 Posts: 1,170	Re: Foreverland I really like it! It has a really pleasant atmosphere especially the breakdown. I just love the entire atmosphere you've made in it, it seems so light and I think you need to turn down the volume a bit though the bass and just the entire mix quavers when it gets loud, and you should lighten up on the compression your transients are drowned out, particularly in the end __________________ http://pyroshock.bandcamp.com http://soundcloud.com/pyroshock Last edited by Pyroshock; 03-26-2009 at 05:01 PM..

03-26-2009, 07:00 PM	#4
Ruritsu FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 479	Re: Foreverland I know nothing about making music, only listening, so I can't critique, but I liked the song enough to download it so thumbs up ^^ __________________ =__=' My sig was 22 pixels too tall, so this is here instead...

03-28-2009, 11:19 AM	#6
tofurox Them arrows. Join Date: May 2006 Location: Allen, Texas Age: 30 Posts: 2,263	Re: Foreverland Love it! __________________ This sig has been enhanced by the FFR Staff for being too large. Thank you for participating.

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