Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open - Page 26

N.T.M. · 11-20-2009, 06:52 PM

I'm beginning to feel better.

**Ghakimx** · 11-20-2009, 07:02 PM

I sure as hell feel like crap.
*Dies*

N.T.M. · 11-20-2009, 07:03 PM

icontrolyourworld · 11-20-2009, 07:10 PM

lol i finish my files in 9 or less hours usually. but then again i'm not a sync nerd

(ok sometimes i am)

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-20-2009, 07:21 PM

If FFR shuts down or something, everything will be updated/posted on Bluexoon.

(Sargon) Remember V2
Looking a lot better. A bit repetitive and generic but overall does not affect the file much. Accepted

(Bluearrowll) Holographic Universe
File needs a rehaul with layering and sync. Quit out. Rejected

(Dimentio) Jumper
This reminded me of Noon's More More More file, rofl. Overlayered and isn't pack worthy. Rejected

(Icyworld) Hurry Somebody Up V2
Nice to see that you did my fixes. However at this point of the pack, I'm going to have to reject. Too short and underwhelming and really didn't see anything worth playing through again. Also you didn't layer in the percussion for every 8th note which still bothers me. Rejected

(Moches) Landscape
You stepped Tsukasa <33333333333333 File is really cool actually. Accepted

(Ntc2415) Desolate
Too boring/generic. Quit out. Rejected

(N.T.M.) Dream Theater Keyboard Solo
As Kommi mentioned, fix those burst patterns. Rest of the file is good though. Maybe/Pending until I hear from moches and tsuka.

(Buizel) Loki
File drags on and is pretty generic TBH. 8th note streaming with 24ths thrown in every few measures with consistent but boring layering isn't really what this pack is looking for. Good structure and layering just not really replayable. Rejected

(TranceCore) Morphine
Too repetitive and generic. Work on your song choices, dawg. Rejected.

(TranceCore) Nazrin
Missed some sounds you didn't layer. Nothing in particular stood out in the file and it's quite generic. Rejected

(TranceCore) The Kappa Way as Said
Fun swing file but what the ****ing hell was with the Yellow Note Syndrome section. Missed some notes and the freeze usage was pretty bad.Rejected

(TranceCore) Final Destination 4 Theme
Those jacks were god awful. File is layered well but doesn't offer much and found this too generic.Rejected

(TranceCore) The Purpose Song
A bunch of really awkward patterns during rainbow dumpstream parts. I don't know what's up with you and layering jacks in like all of your files (It's fine in moderation and if it fits nicely but not if you spam that **** in every single file you step). Note right after the freeze was dumb and layering is all over the place. Rejected

(Rebound) Garnet Moon
Yeah, you're going to have to fix up the hand/quad usages. They don't work well and it's pretty overlayered with how you're using them. The 32nds+48ths seem better if they are trills rather than rolls. Overall song and file are pretty generic so I wouldn't consider this pack worthy. Good structure and all but replayability is rather questionable. Rejected

(Ferrari) A Simple Life
Guilty Gear music **** yes. Structured and layered very well for an easy file. However drags on a bit gets kinda repetitive from seeing the exact same 32nds over and over again. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

(Who_cares973) Abstract Art
Drags on a bit but that was enjoyable. Accepted

(Bynary Fission) Himalaya
Measure 53 and 54 those mini bursts are dumb. A whole bunch of awkward patterns throughout the file. Even though it's a rainbow file, it drags on way too long and it gets very dull and boring as the file progresses. Good sync and structure and is rather artistic. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

**Ghakimx** · 11-20-2009, 07:35 PM

Looking through the notes, I'm having doubts of my submissions acceptance.

Quote:

Originally Posted by icontrolyourworld

lol i finish my files in 9 or less hours usually. but then again i'm not a sync nerd

(ok sometimes i am)

I took longer because OSTER is a ****ing assh- with his songs sudden usage of random 12ths, 24ths and other sh**s. Not only that, but one of his songs isn't 150! Its 149.988!

**** you OSTER.

**i love you** · 11-20-2009, 08:25 PM

Gundam, did you played the v2 version or the first one i submitted?

N.T.M. · 11-20-2009, 08:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by N.T.M.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

(N.T.M.) Dream Theater Keyboard Solo
As Kommi mentioned, fix those burst patterns. Rest of the file is good though. Until then, Rejected

Eh, since I really happen to like the bursts, would you tell me exactly what measure/measures?

*edit* Again I'd like to know if I may keep the current chart for oni and make a simplified chart for heavy.

^^^I don't think they heard you.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-20-2009, 08:49 PM

actually hold onto that thought. I want to see what moches and tsuka have to say about your file so I'll change my reject to a maybe/pending for the time being.

Quote:

Originally Posted by i love you

Gundam, did you played the v2 version or the first one i submitted?

V2

xferrarix · 11-20-2009, 09:36 PM

i'll make fixes for simple life i guess.... just the beginning pr at least, maybe small other changes. got more wips for this anyway hehu

**jimerax** · 11-20-2009, 10:23 PM

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Originally Posted by Gundam-Dude

Only complaint is that the trills are harder than the rest of the file

so should i resubmit the chopin file with some pattern fix or not?

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-20-2009, 10:41 PM

do you still have your DCP2 submission (paraoka song or whatever). send that in instead if you still have it

If you're not doing anymore files, then don't worry about the trill thing. I'll accept it as it is now. Everyone else pretty much said yes (except Rebirth)

**jimerax** · 11-21-2009, 12:33 AM

FFR3/DCP2 one was a yamajet song I think, I'll send it when I get the stepmania PC.
also will resend heroic polonaise w/ minor fix since I found better/less gay patterns on some parts.

btw the accepted list says 28 but I can only count 23 files there.

Dr Tran · 11-21-2009, 02:33 AM

oh cool abstract art was accepted

N.T.M. · 11-27-2009, 06:54 PM

Well I sent the version with the simplified bursts.

**Gundam-Dude** · 11-27-2009, 08:26 PM

now that the database is restored I can finally update the first post without getting dumb error timeouts

operationstrawbarry · 11-27-2009, 08:40 PM

damn.... I thought knife would be decent with the interesting stops that I put in it.

Oh well. Definatly the wrong pack for me. Depending on the themes of future packs, you guys might see knife again.

**jimerax** · 11-27-2009, 10:16 PM

with these # of submissions/accepted files, is the deadline sometime in Dec?

**kommisar** · 11-27-2009, 10:22 PM

deadline is supposed to be before the jan 1st release

**jimerax** · 11-27-2009, 10:27 PM

that sounds good

11-20-2009, 06:52 PM	#501
N.T.M. FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Reno, NV Age: 34 Posts: 890	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I'm beginning to feel better. __________________ “Beware the irrational, however seductive. Shun the 'transcendent' and all who invite you to subordinate or annihilate yourself. Distrust compassion; prefer dignity for yourself and others. Don't be afraid to be thought arrogant or selfish... Suspect your own motives, and all excuses. Do not live for others any more than you would expect others to live for you.” Christopher Hitchens

11-20-2009, 07:02 PM	#502
Ghakimx Cutie&Handshaking Sounds Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Xingapore Posts: 1,594	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open I sure as hell feel like crap. Dies __________________ I AM ASHAMED OF MY STUPIDITY AND MUST COMMIT SEPPUKU. FORGIVE ME, FFR. Ninjas NEVER die. Now on a 30 kill streak.

11-20-2009, 07:03 PM	#503
N.T.M. FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Reno, NV Age: 34 Posts: 890	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open lol __________________ “Beware the irrational, however seductive. Shun the 'transcendent' and all who invite you to subordinate or annihilate yourself. Distrust compassion; prefer dignity for yourself and others. Don't be afraid to be thought arrogant or selfish... Suspect your own motives, and all excuses. Do not live for others any more than you would expect others to live for you.” Christopher Hitchens

11-20-2009, 07:10 PM	#504
icontrolyourworld Enjoy life! Join Date: Oct 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 4,181	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open lol i finish my files in 9 or less hours usually. but then again i'm not a sync nerd (ok sometimes i am) __________________ http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...d.php?t=149106

11-20-2009, 07:21 PM	#505
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open If FFR shuts down or something, everything will be updated/posted on Bluexoon. (Sargon) Remember V2 Looking a lot better. A bit repetitive and generic but overall does not affect the file much. Accepted (Bluearrowll) Holographic Universe File needs a rehaul with layering and sync. Quit out. Rejected (Dimentio) Jumper This reminded me of Noon's More More More file, rofl. Overlayered and isn't pack worthy. Rejected (Icyworld) Hurry Somebody Up V2 Nice to see that you did my fixes. However at this point of the pack, I'm going to have to reject. Too short and underwhelming and really didn't see anything worth playing through again. Also you didn't layer in the percussion for every 8th note which still bothers me. Rejected (Moches) Landscape You stepped Tsukasa <33333333333333 File is really cool actually. Accepted (Ntc2415) Desolate Too boring/generic. Quit out. Rejected (N.T.M.) Dream Theater Keyboard Solo As Kommi mentioned, fix those burst patterns. Rest of the file is good though. Maybe/Pending until I hear from moches and tsuka. (Buizel) Loki File drags on and is pretty generic TBH. 8th note streaming with 24ths thrown in every few measures with consistent but boring layering isn't really what this pack is looking for. Good structure and layering just not really replayable. Rejected (TranceCore) Morphine Too repetitive and generic. Work on your song choices, dawg. Rejected. (TranceCore) Nazrin Missed some sounds you didn't layer. Nothing in particular stood out in the file and it's quite generic. Rejected (TranceCore) The Kappa Way as Said Fun swing file but what the **ing hell was with the Yellow Note Syndrome section. Missed some notes and the freeze usage was pretty bad.Rejected (TranceCore) Final Destination 4 Theme Those jacks were god awful. File is layered well but doesn't offer much and found this too generic.Rejected (TranceCore) The Purpose Song A bunch of really awkward patterns during rainbow dumpstream parts. I don't know what's up with you and layering jacks in like all of your files (It's fine in moderation and if it fits nicely but not if you spam that in every single file you step). Note right after the freeze was dumb and layering is all over the place. Rejected (Rebound) Garnet Moon Yeah, you're going to have to fix up the hand/quad usages. They don't work well and it's pretty overlayered with how you're using them. The 32nds+48ths seem better if they are trills rather than rolls. Overall song and file are pretty generic so I wouldn't consider this pack worthy. Good structure and all but replayability is rather questionable. Rejected (Ferrari) A Simple Life Guilty Gear music yes. Structured and layered very well for an easy file. However drags on a bit gets kinda repetitive from seeing the exact same 32nds over and over again. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges. (Who_cares973) Abstract Art Drags on a bit but that was enjoyable. Accepted (Bynary Fission) Himalaya Measure 53 and 54 those mini bursts are dumb. A whole bunch of awkward patterns throughout the file. Even though it's a rainbow file, it drags on way too long and it gets very dull and boring as the file progresses. Good sync and structure and is rather artistic. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges. __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles** (4key & 6key) Last edited by Gundam-Dude; 11-20-2009 at 08:50 PM..

11-20-2009, 08:25 PM	#507
i love you Live a wonderful life~ Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 7,313	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Gundam, did you played the v2 version or the first one i submitted? __________________ =============================== The idea that RDCP 3 may come out in the future is a fun thought to have~ ===============================

11-20-2009, 09:36 PM	#510
xferrarix FFR Player Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Spring Hill Age: 31 Posts: 1,091	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open i'll make fixes for simple life i guess.... just the beginning pr at least, maybe small other changes. got more wips for this anyway hehu

11-20-2009, 10:41 PM	#512
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open do you still have your DCP2 submission (paraoka song or whatever). send that in instead if you still have it If you're not doing anymore files, then don't worry about the trill thing. I'll accept it as it is now. Everyone else pretty much said yes (except Rebirth) __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-21-2009, 12:33 AM	#513
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open FFR3/DCP2 one was a yamajet song I think, I'll send it when I get the stepmania PC. also will resend heroic polonaise w/ minor fix since I found better/less gay patterns on some parts. btw the accepted list says 28 but I can only count 23 files there.

11-21-2009, 02:33 AM	#514
Dr Tran Banned Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 1,134	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open oh cool abstract art was accepted

11-27-2009, 06:54 PM	#515
N.T.M. FFR Player Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Reno, NV Age: 34 Posts: 890	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open Well I sent the version with the simplified bursts. __________________ “Beware the irrational, however seductive. Shun the 'transcendent' and all who invite you to subordinate or annihilate yourself. Distrust compassion; prefer dignity for yourself and others. Don't be afraid to be thought arrogant or selfish... Suspect your own motives, and all excuses. Do not live for others any more than you would expect others to live for you.” Christopher Hitchens

11-27-2009, 08:26 PM	#516
Gundam-Dude `~` Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 7,327	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open now that the database is restored I can finally update the first post without getting dumb error timeouts __________________ (Download My Magnum Opus, Solo Kpop Pack!) My Simfiles (4key & 6key)

11-27-2009, 08:40 PM	#517
operationstrawbarry FFR Player Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Taipei Taiwan Age: 37 Posts: 802	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open damn.... I thought knife would be decent with the interesting stops that I put in it. Oh well. Definatly the wrong pack for me. Depending on the themes of future packs, you guys might see knife again. Last edited by operationstrawbarry; 11-27-2009 at 08:57 PM..

11-27-2009, 10:16 PM	#518
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open with these # of submissions/accepted files, is the deadline sometime in Dec?

11-27-2009, 10:22 PM	#519
kommisar Dark Chancellor Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Moncton, NB Age: 33 Posts: 7,301	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open deadline is supposed to be before the jan 1st release __________________

11-27-2009, 10:27 PM	#520
jimerax ★_★★^★★ Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Tokyo Posts: 8,185	Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open that sounds good

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