My awful song

**robertsona** · 12-10-2008, 03:56 PM

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/186556

I don't even want to link to the other one because it's so bad.

Suggestions?

This was made after like tooling around in FL Studio for a really short time.

**knuckles2224** · 12-10-2008, 04:04 PM

It's so bad I didn't bother listening to it

**Mans0n** · 12-10-2008, 05:46 PM

very annoying in my opinion, i voted 5 though, because i hate fags that 0 bomb your stuff.

**dandandamdandan1111** · 12-10-2008, 06:49 PM

tone down the volume a bit

**Atharus** · 12-10-2008, 07:32 PM

I don't mind the song. I doubt it's any consolation, but it's a lot better than any of my early attempts in FL Studio.

In my opinion you need to work on the volumes and mixing a bit more.

Also, look around on kvraudio.com for some free instruments and plugins.

**iPatcH** · 12-10-2008, 08:49 PM

whoa you should probably turn down all the volume levels

slayer is seriously the worst synth ever and I can't understand why anyone uses it

the harmonics aren't too bad

your percussion is flat and weak. it's not an amen break unless you sample amen brother.

John McPain · 12-10-2008, 08:51 PM

I like it, but I also like Ramstine so in alot of peoples' opinion I have no taste in music.

**infinity.** · 12-10-2008, 09:51 PM

i actually like this,
when the 8bit and the slayer mesh sounds nice, atleast to me.

but yeah, try eqing stuff, its really cluttered and messy

but you're not bad at all

**championanwar** · 12-11-2008, 07:50 AM

I liked this, it has alot of potential. I can imagine a band playing this, has a nice feel to it. The drums could be improved a bit. The levels were a bit all over the place, but its a great start. Nice job.

**DarkbearX** · 12-11-2008, 04:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by iPatcH

slayer is seriously the worst synth ever and I can't understand why anyone uses it

Pretty much. Although if you're patient enough, you can make it work.

Also, it's not a bad track robert rofl. Reviewed on NG.

12-10-2008, 03:56 PM	#1
robertsona missa in h-moll Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: nyc Age: 28 Posts: 3,995	My awful song http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/186556 I don't even want to link to the other one because it's so bad. Suggestions? This was made after like tooling around in FL Studio for a really short time. __________________

12-10-2008, 05:46 PM	#3
Mans0n Sun and Stars Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Central Californ.i.a. Age: 29 Posts: 2,907	Re: My awful song very annoying in my opinion, i voted 5 though, because i hate fags that 0 bomb your stuff. __________________ http://www.facebook.com/?ref=logo#!/Br0wnbread Check out my band profile and give it a like! :P

12-10-2008, 06:49 PM	#4
dandandamdandan1111 the baker man Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: merryland Age: 30 Posts: 2,176	Re: My awful song tone down the volume a bit

12-10-2008, 07:32 PM	#5
Atharus FFR Player Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 18	Re: My awful song I don't mind the song. I doubt it's any consolation, but it's a lot better than any of my early attempts in FL Studio. In my opinion you need to work on the volumes and mixing a bit more. Also, look around on kvraudio.com for some free instruments and plugins. Last edited by Atharus; 12-11-2008 at 03:44 AM..

12-10-2008, 08:49 PM	#6
iPatcH Swamp Lemons Rule Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: not detroit you idiots Age: 35 Posts: 3,370	Re: My awful song whoa you should probably turn down all the volume levels slayer is seriously the worst synth ever and I can't understand why anyone uses it the harmonics aren't too bad your percussion is flat and weak. it's not an amen break unless you sample amen brother. __________________ put on a donk on it

12-10-2008, 09:51 PM	#8
infinity. sideways 8 Join Date: Sep 2007 Age: 31 Posts: 1,706	Re: My awful song i actually like this, when the 8bit and the slayer mesh sounds nice, atleast to me. but yeah, try eqing stuff, its really cluttered and messy but you're not bad at all __________________ signatures are for nerds nerds

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