Old 11-30-2005, 09:00 PM   #41
cowboy_b_bop2787
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Originally Posted by Eyoshi
After reading mickey's poem, I decided to make up an haiku on the spot.

Sniper
He lies far away
Watching as his target comes
And pulls the trigger.

Does anybody know why people still like haiku? I'm not sure about the reason myself, so I'd like to hear what you think is the reason...
To be quite technical that isn't a haiku. You follow the same structure as a Haiku but theres one main problem, you didn't speak of nature. A haiku is a poem about nature writen with a basic cyllabic structure of five, seven, five. but the main thing is that it is about nature. So you have jsut writen a free form poem.
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